The First Kiss (Incomplete) - Page 2

roadside_fury · 08-09-2006

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Originally Posted by Wedge

roadside_fury this is probably one of the greatest stories ive ever read i really really liked it a lot and boy would i give any amount of money for someone to illustrate this or make it into a movie. Ireally loved the detail in jesse's transition into a woman and all the facial details its quite interesting. I really hope to see way more from you and maybe you could fit in cultaral changes in your next story thats another great idea.

Wow, thanks for your comment. As for the cultural or racial changes, good idea, I might think aobut that.

ChedPal64 · 08-09-2006

I liked it. Excellent descriptions. Nice twists. I like how you managed to turn everything around on them in the second set of changes.
Good work!

roadside_fury · 08-09-2006

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Originally Posted by ChedPal64

I liked it. Excellent descriptions. Nice twists. I like how you managed to turn everything around on them in the second set of changes.
Good work!

Thanks for reading. Yeah, I wanted to AP them to set of for the TG and DTG, so it would be more interesting. And yeah, to switch it up. Not only did they experience sex the first time, they also got to experience it as the other gender. Now how many people can say they've done that in a matter minutes? He he...

Wedge · 08-09-2006

And boy dont we all wish we could

roadside_fury · 01-15-2013

Oh wow, my story got posted into the new story thread. It's a heck of a necro, but I really need to work on the second part! And yes, if anyone wants to do illustrations they are more then welcome to. I'm not sure what to do about the second part, I may not continue with the same characters, but only have them in mentioning as the catalyst or whatever it is spreads.

01-15-2013	#17
roadside_fury Frequent Poster Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Small shack on Route 66. Posts: 168	Re: The First Kiss (Incomplete) Oh wow, my story got posted into the new story thread. It's a heck of a necro, but I really need to work on the second part! And yes, if anyone wants to do illustrations they are more then welcome to. I'm not sure what to do about the second part, I may not continue with the same characters, but only have them in mentioning as the catalyst or whatever it is spreads. __________________ Roadside_Fury, your everyday road rage specialist. "We again apologize for the subtitles. Those responsible for sacking those responsible have now been sacked." Last edited by roadside_fury; 01-15-2013 at 11:11 PM.

08-09-2006	#14
ChedPal64 Process Fan Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 80	I liked it. Excellent descriptions. Nice twists. I like how you managed to turn everything around on them in the second set of changes. Good work!

08-09-2006	#16
Wedge Fan of The Process Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 147	And boy dont we all wish we could