SW Story: Stale Meal [Part 2/?]

[LK]

I'm curious: do you think I am one of your dolls that you can control to gratify your fantasies and just swallow whatever cumshot you put out? Must be frustrating that I keep on going despite your valiant efforts to put me in my place.

I hate when people ask for feedback who haven't bothered to study the basics on their own. I would expect a child to be struggling where this guy is, not a grown-ass man (teenager?).

It isn't that difficult to take a general statement and point out exceptions. But it is harder to accept that exceptions do not necessarily refute general statements. Egocentrism is a terrible thing.

This is fun, keep posting and telling me that it isn't the content of my message but the delivery that you take issue with and feel a need to bury with words.

[qzar9999]

What. The. Fuck. Are you talking about? "Dolls"? "Control"? Sounds like you're projecting.

I've said what I had to say. "You're a jerk. A complete kneebiter." End of message.

[LK]

Your meaningless opinion is noted. Carry on.

[qzar9999]

"You're a jerk. A complete kneebiter."

[Prof_Sai]

So Lorekeep, if it is valid and fair to criticize a story, why isn't it valid to criticize your response?

Whyamihere respond civilly to criticism. You could not. Your critique failed as badly as Whyamihere's story, but he wants to improve. Do you?

[qzar9999]

Originally Posted by Prof_Sai

...he wants to improve. Do you?

Considering he hasn't in years, that's kind of a silly question, don't you think?

[Prof_Sai]

Originally Posted by qzar9999

Considering he hasn't in years, that's kind of a silly question, don't you think?

We shouldn't give up hope. I remember when he was cool. He might find himself someday.

[authar]

Long time lurker, I have been with this community since 2003 when I discovered I wasn't the only one who fantasized the strange and taboo. I'm sure we all remember our first attempts to write something, but in case LK has forgotten his first piece of writing that was sent out into the community, allow me to remind him. You sucked big time. It wasn't even LK then. But you did get better and better and better. then you peaked. Congrats, you are that grumpy old man that people deal with because he created the community that they use but despise due to his attitude. shape up. Oh, what am I kidding, you won't. At best, you will bitch at me and others, at worst, you will threaten. Please, threaten me on the internet, bud, I cannot wait for you to hack my location and send my secrets.

[qzar9999]

I'm genuinely curious- what WAS his first story? I was probably around for it (since 1999, baby!) but my memory ain't so great.

[Prof_Sai]

Post it! Post it!

[authar]

Sadly I cannot since it was in an external hard drive that was tossed overboard on accident while letting a friend borrow it to exchange movies. We both were sad that day. he lost the Avengers, I lost $1000 of porn. I mean... My movies. >.>

[qzar9999]

Do you recall the title, by chance? Or what it was about? It might be in an archive I have.