tell me what you all think? - Page 2

Kvasir · 12-31-2006

I like it. It seems real cute to me for some reason, as for the concept... I don't like norse mythology at all, it's stupid and completely retarded...(can you sense the sarcasim here? I mean seriously<<<<look at the name... any way if you ever need help in that regards... just ask, I'm more then willing to help[hoping not to sound to uppity])

GreatDragon AD · 12-31-2006

Well, I can definitely tell you put a lot of tim, thought, and effort in to making this character. Believe me, I didn't create my characters in just minutes. Anyway, you definitely got something there. Love to see more o your character soon. Don't stop from there though. Just keep this up and you will be fine. BTW, Prophet Tenebrae is rigth about the energy transfering thing not being original. It has been done but its been one of the good ways for growth. Look at me, I got one of my characters who can transfer energy from a jewel into certain parts of their body while the other just transfer her own energy into her muscles. Basically, we wer ein the same situation. Anyway, I hope you do well on this. I'm also working hard into getting my own webcomic series. I can't draw but I do write stories and create characters. That's why I have a blog where I host my characters and their pics done by different artosts. Most of the work are commissions Check it out:

http://gdadgirls.bakunyuu.com/

Go check the "Characters" section for the profiles. They're just their old profiles but I did worked on some new ones for the webcomic idea. I have written a lot of stories so if you need help on writing profiles and such, let me know. Again, good luck on what you are doing and tell me what you think of my characters.

Jumba · 12-31-2006

Its excellent and I struggled to find a critism. So I really did get bottom barrel stuff

Its spelt perverts..... Thats it

12-31-2006

Very nice art. The last one is my favourite I love the unwilling BE victim who lets the viewers know what she's thinking

Sutibaru · 12-31-2006

Well so far everything seems pretty nice to me. Both the character and her story as well. As for the "similarity" between her and Subi, it really is not the same. Subi has a energy that she constantly has within her body called "qi" or "chi". Qi is believed to be part of everything that exists, as in ?life force? or ?spiritual energy,? It is most often translated as ?energy flow.?

So Subi has to control her energy that she has while your character absorbs the energy from a separate object. Her heirloom. Your character will also has qi like every one of us but it is not what gives your character an expansion.

So go with whatever you think is the best. ^w^

AhziDahaka · 12-31-2006

It's kinda like Sparkling Generation Valkyrie Yuuki (a webcomic), but with lots of expansion. ...That is to say, I like it.

I think the whole absorbtion thing works well enough, too. I can think of a few other characters that do that (namely Buxom Gal and Argent), but it's definitely something that's far from overdone.

Good luck with this, should you decide to give it a try, as well as with any other ventures you may endeavor upon.

Aahz · 12-31-2006

Nice work, I like it. Look forward to more.

spongebathe83 · 12-31-2006

Awesome, keep 'em coming.

12-31-2006

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Originally Posted by GreatDragon AD

Well, I can definitely tell you put a lot of tim, thought, and effort in to making this character. Believe me, I didn't create my characters in just minutes. Anyway, you definitely got something there. Love to see more o your character soon. Don't stop from there though. Just keep this up and you will be fine. BTW, Prophet Tenebrae is rigth about the energy transfering thing not being original. It has been done but its been one of the good ways for growth. Look at me, I got one of my characters who can transfer energy from a jewel into certain parts of their body while the other just transfer her own energy into her muscles. Basically, we wer ein the same situation. Anyway, I hope you do well on this. I'm also working hard into getting my own webcomic series. I can't draw but I do write stories and create characters. That's why I have a blog where I host my characters and their pics done by different artosts. Most of the work are commissions Check it out:

http://gdadgirls.bakunyuu.com/

Go check the "Characters" section for the profiles. They're just their old profiles but I did worked on some new ones for the webcomic idea. I have written a lot of stories so if you need help on writing profiles and such, let me know. Again, good luck on what you are doing and tell me what you think of my characters.

lol actually it did take a couple minutes to do this XD mostly under 30 minutes at best >> and i've seen your characters before remember you asked me to draw you grape? im "bootsy" if you couldnt tell ^^;

as for the profile thing .. i think i may need some help on that concept in the future, and you have very interesting character ^o^/)

12-31-2006

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Originally Posted by Jumba

Its excellent and I struggled to find a critism. So I really did get bottom barrel stuff

Its spelt perverts..... Thats it

lol yeah i kinda rushed that part actualy,without bothering to spell check XD
luckly since its a roughsketch i can go over some of the errors or other ^o^/)
dont worry so much about being last to comment though

SabreX · 12-31-2006

Wow, superb art style.

My only suggestion is a bit of a doozy; ink it. Really, your artwork isn't lacking in anything that comes to mind, but inking it and perhaps even colouring it can give it the shove into looking truly professional. Apologies for suggesting this, but that's the ONLY thing I can think of that could possibly improve this. Once again, loving the style.

AhziDahaka · 12-31-2006

It's a conceptual sketch...

12-31-2006	#13
Kvasir Thinking WAY to much Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In the middle of nowhere Posts: 162	I like it. It seems real cute to me for some reason, as for the concept... I don't like norse mythology at all, it's stupid and completely retarded...(can you sense the sarcasim here? I mean seriously<<<<look at the name... any way if you ever need help in that regards... just ask, I'm more then willing to help[hoping not to sound to uppity]) __________________ His name was Kvasir. He was so steeped in all matters and mysteries of the nine worlds since the fire and ice first met in Ginnungagap that no god nor man nor giant nor dwarf ever regretted putting him a question or asking his opinion. ~Mead of Poetry~ http://golseum.deviantart.com/ "Hey dude you're so uncool, but hey that's alright. Like, there's no need to get up tight. My eyes reflect the stars and smile lights up my face, we're on an amazing flight in space."

12-31-2006	#14
GreatDragon AD Twin Warrior of Fire Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Miami, FL Posts: 468	Well, I can definitely tell you put a lot of tim, thought, and effort in to making this character. Believe me, I didn't create my characters in just minutes. Anyway, you definitely got something there. Love to see more o your character soon. Don't stop from there though. Just keep this up and you will be fine. BTW, Prophet Tenebrae is rigth about the energy transfering thing not being original. It has been done but its been one of the good ways for growth. Look at me, I got one of my characters who can transfer energy from a jewel into certain parts of their body while the other just transfer her own energy into her muscles. Basically, we wer ein the same situation. Anyway, I hope you do well on this. I'm also working hard into getting my own webcomic series. I can't draw but I do write stories and create characters. That's why I have a blog where I host my characters and their pics done by different artosts. Most of the work are commissions Check it out: http://gdadgirls.bakunyuu.com/ Go check the "Characters" section for the profiles. They're just their old profiles but I did worked on some new ones for the webcomic idea. I have written a lot of stories so if you need help on writing profiles and such, let me know. Again, good luck on what you are doing and tell me what you think of my characters. __________________ PUERTORICAN POWER!!! ...'nuff said. http://gdadgirls.bakunyuu.com/

12-31-2006	#17
Sutibaru --- Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 5,865	Well so far everything seems pretty nice to me. Both the character and her story as well. As for the "similarity" between her and Subi, it really is not the same. Subi has a energy that she constantly has within her body called "qi" or "chi". Qi is believed to be part of everything that exists, as in ?life force? or ?spiritual energy,? It is most often translated as ?energy flow.? So Subi has to control her energy that she has while your character absorbs the energy from a separate object. Her heirloom. Your character will also has qi like every one of us but it is not what gives your character an expansion. So go with whatever you think is the best. ^w^ __________________ Deviantart\|FurAffinity\|Tumblr\|Picarto

12-31-2006	#20
spongebathe83 DA artist amateur Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Elsewhere Posts: 787	Awesome, keep 'em coming. __________________ . . http://havent-slept.deviantart.com http://groups.yahoo.com/group/havent-slept/ -Just remember, you're a pervert too.-

12-31-2006	#15
Jumba Crazy Old Brit Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 1,250	Its excellent and I struggled to find a critism. So I really did get bottom barrel stuff Its spelt perverts..... Thats it

12-31-2006	#16
JagdPanther Guest Posts: n/a	Very nice art. The last one is my favourite I love the unwilling BE victim who lets the viewers know what she's thinking

12-31-2006	#18
AhziDahaka This is a user title. Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 383	It's kinda like Sparkling Generation Valkyrie Yuuki (a webcomic), but with lots of expansion. ...That is to say, I like it. I think the whole absorbtion thing works well enough, too. I can think of a few other characters that do that (namely Buxom Gal and Argent), but it's definitely something that's far from overdone. Good luck with this, should you decide to give it a try, as well as with any other ventures you may endeavor upon.

12-31-2006	#19
Aahz Process Fan Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 76	Nice work, I like it. Look forward to more.

12-31-2006	#23
SabreX Shh, I'm a Ninja o.o Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Canada Posts: 136	Wow, superb art style. My only suggestion is a bit of a doozy; ink it. Really, your artwork isn't lacking in anything that comes to mind, but inking it and perhaps even colouring it can give it the shove into looking truly professional. Apologies for suggesting this, but that's the ONLY thing I can think of that could possibly improve this. Once again, loving the style.