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11-22-2005

Hi, sorry to be so silent. I usually just don't have much to say. But I do love your series and admire how you've kept going for so long. By the way, I believe that the mysterious person in Kanako (sp?) Keitaro's little adopted sister. She seems like the more likely suspect to me.

TonicBH · 11-22-2005

I don't mean to be a leech, so I'll post just to say this:

The art is good, it just needs to be less sketchy and a bit more smooth. Since you use computers to draw rather than pen and paper, I'd say it's about time to learn sketching, then maybe scanning your work into a computer and fine-tune it there. The processes you've made are great, Test-0. I anticipate more coming from you.

Test-0 · 11-22-2005

Greetings.

It's nice to at least two people coming out of lurking to post.

On to my art style though, like I said previously in this thread, I can easily 'clean up' my drawings so there isn't a whole lot of sketchy lines, but I in fact make them on purpose, because it gives it the unfinished look I feel is in everything I draw. Also, I was thinking of going back and patching up the series later as a color comic, so I'll likely just clean it up then. Also planing on redoing anything that I didn't like and whatnot, but for now I'll stick to trying to finish what I started, and see what I feel like doing later on.

Thanks for the critisism though, nice to see someone stating what they feel instead of cowering from their own fear of being critisised back.

11-22-2005	#13
ayh Guest Posts: n/a	hello Hi, sorry to be so silent. I usually just don't have much to say. But I do love your series and admire how you've kept going for so long. By the way, I believe that the mysterious person in Kanako (sp?) Keitaro's little adopted sister. She seems like the more likely suspect to me.

11-22-2005	#14
TonicBH Process Fan Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 52	I don't mean to be a leech, so I'll post just to say this: The art is good, it just needs to be less sketchy and a bit more smooth. Since you use computers to draw rather than pen and paper, I'd say it's about time to learn sketching, then maybe scanning your work into a computer and fine-tune it there. The processes you've made are great, Test-0. I anticipate more coming from you.

11-22-2005	#15
Test-0 ching ching Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 2,138	Greetings. It's nice to at least two people coming out of lurking to post. On to my art style though, like I said previously in this thread, I can easily 'clean up' my drawings so there isn't a whole lot of sketchy lines, but I in fact make them on purpose, because it gives it the unfinished look I feel is in everything I draw. Also, I was thinking of going back and patching up the series later as a color comic, so I'll likely just clean it up then. Also planing on redoing anything that I didn't like and whatnot, but for now I'll stick to trying to finish what I started, and see what I feel like doing later on. Thanks for the critisism though, nice to see someone stating what they feel instead of cowering from their own fear of being critisised back.