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Okay. I am going to work hard to get 7 out sooner rather than later and have it include the next chapters of The Supermarket, The Condition and The Familiar as those seem to be the most popular stories.
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I appreciated the hints at more voluptuous options for future installments of The Supermarket; while BE is my main kink, I thoroughly enjoy short, soft, voluptuous body types, so mild weight gain and even slight female shrinking would be very welcome additions! It would certainly allow for more points to be spread, and upping her curvaceousness would help with those harder to find larger bra sizes. Of course being shorter also helps magnify the scale of curves, as Bridgette so admirably demonstrates ![]() And we still haven't seen how the points are earned, or how often. Mystery! |
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I am glad you liked it. I am also glad you picked up on some subtle plot points that I wanted to establish without beating the readers over the head with them. I want to create some tension with this story and show what the characters would be willing to do in order to get more points that would surprise the reader and not necessairily be what you would expect...starting with Radhi giving a couple away to Gloria as being an act that you wouldn't see coming. Some more suprises are on the way.
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It will be interesting to see how long it takes to earn points, and what actions earn them. Does simply doing a good job accumulate points? or is it random? or maybe it requires them to go perform duties above and beyond their assigned positions? I wonder if perhaps there might also be opt-in staff surveys that give bonus points for participation; or by participating, enters the employee in a prize draw to win points... interesting... I'll certainly be keeping an eye out for chapter 7! And what's up with The Condition? that cold hard look she gave... is the condition supernatural in origin? possession? succubi ancestry? |
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All of those point earning scenarios are good guesses and reasonable possibilities. Radhi's motives may not be so clear but I do think she will establish herself as a clear atagonist so I don't think her "generosity" is that at all. She has a strategy, but the trouble is she can't control everyone else - particularly the other managers/dept heads.
Elena (The Condition) can be scary sometimes, can't she? It is almost like something sinister is growing inside her much like her bust is. Remember she also mentiones that while her mother and brother and aunt have the same condition, she was the only one that had big boobs or strong teeth. I wonder why that is? Maybe one day Randall will get to talk to someone who knows more about her. Incidentally and mostly unrelated, I have weaved in a few easter eggs to tie the stories in togerher to imply that they take place in the same universe but it doesnt necessarily mean any of the characters are related or have crossed paths in any way shape or form...yet Last edited by JJStrebas; 10-29-2017 at 03:12 AM. |
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A combination of height loss and upping the H/W ratio would be an intriguing way to fill out her curves with just a few points, which leaves many more available for boobs... plus she would be on more equal footing with Jess in terms of height ![]() And who knows how many other training courses she needs to complete? here's hoping that new stores get a Nugenicorp machine too, and that the changes are permanent! As for The Condition, I hope that nothing sinister has happened to Sasha.... boy Elena is possessive! Last edited by Darkstorm; 11-09-2017 at 06:09 AM. |
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Yes, I did go heavy on exposition on The Supermarket. I hope I didn't overdo it but I really wanted to expand the scope of the story to show what the typical employee was like and how they felt and looked versus the story focusing too much on the heavy hitters. I want to really set Kianna, Radhi and Bridgette apart for their breast size as well as establish Sung and Stella as superlatives as well for heavy indulgence of the machine but not necessarily pushing for maximum bust size.
And yes..I think you are right that there will be some scheming and strategizing based on the intel that Gloria is getting. I just wonder who will be the beneficiary and who's desires will be fulfilled. Yeah, poor Sasha. I wonder if she is okay... It probably wasnt a good idea to cross Elena but Elena is a nice person. She wouldnt really hurt anyone, would she? I am working on a new story for book 8. I will definitely have another installment of The Supermarket to go along with it. This new story will have a different setting and different elements that I haven't tried before, so it is taking me a little longer to fine tune. But don't worry, BE is the star of the show. As far as what other story to include the next installment of, I haven't decided yet. I'd like ro get back to at least 3 stories per pack or more. Last edited by JJStrebas; 11-09-2017 at 09:15 AM. |
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