Teen Titan Starfire WG

[ProfessorMishap]

Then go tell him and keep that crap off of this forum. You don't have to listen to me, but listen to the rules.

[manigma]

My Eyes!

[Mr. Gun Happy]

You have some proportional issues, along with inconsistent coloring problems. It's not all bad, but there's definitely room for improvement. Keep practicing; you're sure to get better.

[ProfessorMishap]

Originally Posted by calvin228

This was a story that I did a long time ago.

Umm... hellooooooooooo?

Originally Posted by LinkG07

Umm... hellooooooooooo?

I be thinkin' that ye be protestin' too much.
Ye be related to this waste o' space, aren't ye...

[Kyrex]

I'm inclined to agree with Long John. In my experience, pandering and trying to be nice to someone who needs serious critique is not nearly as helpful as the firm slap in the back of the head that honesty provides. By simply posting the pictures up in the first place, you are agree to the unspoken rules of the internet, which usually entails expecting some bad responses to your work, but because you posted it up in the first place, you wanted someone to see it, and you likely wanted someone out there to help you in some way.

Anyone who posts up their work (especially fetish work) and expects a tidal wave of support and praise is delusional.

So, in an effort to be somewhat professional...
-The overall quality is poor, with the blurryness between panels being so bad that I actually sat for an extra few moments waiting for the picture to load only to find that it was naturally that blurry.
-The line art is wiggly and inconsistent. The line tool could have saved this comic in a few of the smaller areas, like the machine/vat/whatever. Starfire herself, has more that a few panels where lines just don't connect to each other. Additionally, you don't seem to have a fully grasp on basic anatomy.
-The coloring is quite bad, with everything changing in color from panel to panel, which could have easily been fixed with a sampling tool (The 'eye dropper tool'). Every panel is filled with artifacts (the little bits of white crap around the edges where the color didn't fill in) and the areas where you tried to add some white for a shiny effect show that you have issues coloring within the lines.

Calvin228, I understand this is some of your very old work, but if that's the case, why not post something newer? What you've shown us here is just... bad.

In closing, I'd like to ask that no one else make a big argument/debate out of this. I'm really f***ing tired of threads having to end with a mod coming in and threatening to ban everyone just because some people can't debate with maturity.

[TanukiCannon]

In an epic battle against good and evil <<generally a poor sentence
How will she end her adventure (Question mark?)

Hello Starfire, glad YOU'RE awake.

I(apostrophe)m going to make you eat (a) massive amount of food
(OR massive amountS of food).

Who are you (comma) unknown man (<Was that really necessary?)

Starfire's skin, the background and her eye colour is different in every panel on this page. So is the background.
Image compression quality is terrible.

I don't feel I need to continue.

[Yermom]

Wha happen?
Does anyone have the picture still?
I just have to see how bad it is.

[Metatron]

I think its safe to say that the following are postulates
1.) This is work he did along time ago and is not that reflective of his current work
2.) There is room for improvement

So with this we can conclude that discussion on how to improve said work is much better than just simply calling it a POS

ok geeze, you all hate it.

I did it when I was like 14, so my art style was crappy.

I dont hear anyone complaining the other crappy art that was put on here. im gonna try to delete it.

[ProfessorMishap]

Don't worry about it Calvin. This isn't the first time this has happened. Trust me...

yea, but still. im just gonna go work on my other strip on the BE forum