Tina Makes Sharon Tiny. Well, Actually, Sharon Makes Sharon Tiny. - Page 2

Prof_Sai · 04-30-2018

Oh noooooooooo..........

JJStrebas · 04-30-2018

Good story, had me hanging on to the very end. The idea of a sentient sub atomic particle invading the doc's body and giving her orgasms while slowly shrinking her is interesting.

OhZone · 04-30-2018

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Originally Posted by JJStrebas

Good story, had me hanging on to the very end. The idea of a sentient sub atomic particle invading then doc's body and giving her orgasms while slowly shrinking her is interesting.

Thank you, JJ. I was looking for a different way to shrink out of existence and that occurred to me!

Also, I know the story doesn't have a lot of character development but it was really just expanding on my fantasy based on the Herritick pic.

And I really enjoyed fantasizing about it and writing this up.

Anotherfetishguy · 05-01-2018

I liked the process but I can't get into the masturbating and ejaculation part. Not my type of SW. However its well written so I guess someone with that preference should enjoy it

swfn · 05-01-2018

Awesome story with very well-balanced shrinking phases. You did a superb job.

OhZone · 05-01-2018

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Originally Posted by Anotherfetishguy

I liked the process but I can't get into the masturbating and ejaculation part. Not my type of SW. However its well written so I guess someone with that preference should enjoy it

Thank you. I consider that a rave review from you!

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Originally Posted by swfn

Awesome story with very well-balanced shrinking phases. You did a superb job.

Thank you very much.

qzar9999 · 05-02-2018

I enjoyed the concept, and it's definitely got its sexy moments.

It's kinda funny seeing those moments where you were clearly typing with one hand, though. lol

OhZone · 05-02-2018

You know me too well. :P

Oh, did you catch my lil jokes?

HmmMm "Little Jokes" would be a good SW story title.

qzar9999 · 05-02-2018

Yeah, the labels on the formulae were an amusing little touch. ^_^

Anotherfetishguy · 05-02-2018

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Originally Posted by OhZone

HmmMm "Little Jokes" would be a good SW story title.

Theres your next story idea: A comedian shrinking while doing standup

OhZone · 05-02-2018

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Originally Posted by Anotherfetishguy

Theres your next story idea: A comedian shrinking while doing standup

Ha

Or maybe some chick who's addicted to bad jokes and puns and gets cursed to shrink a little as "punishment" for each time she tells one.

** nods yes **

An idea.

Vicky Mouse · 05-07-2018

Pun ished.

Yeah, I'll punish ya!

04-30-2018	#13
Prof_Sai Instigator Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Earth, mostly Posts: 5,874	Re: Tina Makes Sharon Tiny. Well, Actually, Sharon Makes Sharon Tiny. Oh noooooooooo..........

04-30-2018	#14
JJStrebas BE Writer Join Date: Aug 2017 Location: USA Posts: 493	Re: Tina Makes Sharon Tiny. Well, Actually, Sharon Makes Sharon Tiny. Good story, had me hanging on to the very end. The idea of a sentient sub atomic particle invading the doc's body and giving her orgasms while slowly shrinking her is interesting. __________________ https://www.amazon.com/author/joryanjstrebas jjstrebas@gmail.com Twitter @jjstrebas https://www.patreon.com/jjstrebas Last edited by JJStrebas; 05-01-2018 at 09:18 AM.

05-01-2018	#16
Anotherfetishguy أنا رجل مضحك Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 568	Re: Tina Makes Sharon Tiny. Well, Actually, Sharon Makes Sharon Tiny. I liked the process but I can't get into the masturbating and ejaculation part. Not my type of SW. However its well written so I guess someone with that preference should enjoy it __________________

05-01-2018	#17
swfn Mad Scientist Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 60	Re: Tina Makes Sharon Tiny. Well, Actually, Sharon Makes Sharon Tiny. Awesome story with very well-balanced shrinking phases. You did a superb job. __________________

05-02-2018	#19
qzar9999 Purveyor of Porn Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Gallifrey Posts: 7,071	Re: Tina Makes Sharon Tiny. Well, Actually, Sharon Makes Sharon Tiny. I enjoyed the concept, and it's definitely got its sexy moments. It's kinda funny seeing those moments where you were clearly typing with one hand, though. lol __________________ Tace atque abi. Plenus stercoris est. Editor/Writer, Shrink Fan and Transform Fan Check out Interweb Comics on Twitter or Instagram for all kinds of fun, sexy stuff covering multiple fetishes! Cezar's Comix - New 11/15! http://www.e-junkie.com/cezarscomix My eBooks at amzn.to/1CDS22w or bit.ly/1BZqaCp Quidquid Latine dictum altum videtur. My DeviantArt. Full list of my stories here. How I feel when certain users post anything.

05-02-2018	#20
OhZone OhYeah! Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Jersey Shore Posts: 38,933	Re: Tina Makes Sharon Tiny. Well, Actually, Sharon Makes Sharon Tiny. You know me too well. :P Oh, did you catch my lil jokes? HmmMm "Little Jokes" would be a good SW story title. __________________ -

05-07-2018	#24
Vicky Mouse Submissive lil thing. Join Date: May 2014 Posts: 671	Re: Tina Makes Sharon Tiny. Well, Actually, Sharon Makes Sharon Tiny. Pun ished. Yeah, I'll punish ya!