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#13 |
Come into my parlour...
Join Date: Apr 2008
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Re: Interactive story: Divine ascention (growth, beautification, demon TF and more)
If you ask me that sounds a tad silly, but hey. I ain't the one who decides.
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Vampire Kitty
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Re: Interactive story: Divine ascention (growth, beautification, demon TF and more)
A little silly, yes. The name isn't truly unique either, but it is a bit strange, which is why I thought it'd be good.
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It's play time!
Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 1,183
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Re: Interactive story: Divine ascention (growth, beautification, demon TF and more)
"R," you hinted to him.
"R...eh...Rona!" he said smiling in his teasing way. You couldn't help but chuckle too. "Ra," you continued. "Aw...come on! Ra...coon! Ra...you know your name, who are you?" Mr Criel said as everyone laughed at his antics. "Okay, everyone to your seats and let's get started," Mr Criel said as he began to take attendance... ....................... Later on, lunch had begun and Zeke and Cody were standing outside the classroom talking. "Just talk to her," Cody instructed. "I...I don't know what to say..." Zeke said despondent. "Okay, let's start small. Just say hello to her. That's it," Cody suggested. "I don't know..." Zeke said still shaking as he saw you getting ready to head out. "Relax man, it's just a word. Just say the word," Cody said as he stepped aside to let Zeke see you as you came out. You started come their way. "Here's she comes, do it!" Cody whispered. Zeke took a deep breath as you approached. "H...h....hhhh...eeeeee....llllllll.....o! .....Raven...." he grimaced with excruciating effort. Cody walked over with his head down. "There...I said it," Zeke said. Cody sighed, "Great job Lover Boy! Except she can't hear you. She's already at the other end of the hall." Zeke just lowered his head and walked off disgusted with himself. ........................ A lone figure was busily working in front of a screen displaying bizzarre messages and images. "Yes! I'm in! Now it's mine! The spark will finally be mine! I just need to reroute this...okay...now begin transfer!" A bar began to fill. "I did it! Horay...oops!" The figure raised her arms in triumph only to knock over a nearby drink. "Oh no! My orange smash! Ack! It got on the keys!" "Warning...connection error...aborting transfer..." "No no no! Keep going!" "Warning, connection error..." The bar filled a second before the program went down. "No...what happened? Where did it go?" .................................. "So, camping was a drag as always," Lisa said over lunch outside on a nearby bench, "How was your summer?" You began to recant what little there was to tell of your summer when something in the corner of your eye caught your attention. It was some kind of red light. But as you turned and looked, there were no signs or cars that could have made it. "What's up?" Lisa said looking over your. "I thought I saw something..." you said still looking. Was it just your imagination? What will you do?
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Come into my parlour...
Join Date: Apr 2008
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Re: Interactive story: Divine ascention (growth, beautification, demon TF and more)
I'm not sure if the light's still there or not from that last bit, so
If the light's still there: Walk over and investigate If the lights gone: Shrug and ignore it, resuming your conversation.
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Calling from the New Era
Join Date: May 2006
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Re: Interactive story: Divine ascention (growth, beautification, demon TF and more)
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Lurker
Join Date: May 2007
Posts: 26
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Re: Interactive story: Divine ascention (growth, beautification, demon TF and more)
You think you saw a tall strange figure casted in a eerie light beckoning you
you get up and start to walk over to where the light had came from, as if you were in a trance you start to run |
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#19 |
It's play time!
Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 1,183
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Re: Interactive story: Divine ascention (growth, beautification, demon TF and more)
Whatever it was, it was nowhere in sight so you simply shrugged it off and continued talking.
The day continued on with little else of note so you walked home and bid Lisa farewell. It was nice to have the house to yourself. You decided to fix up some food and read your favorite book. You read for a while before pausing for a breath. It was fun to read about all these magical adventures. You paused and imagined what it would be like. "But...of course that will never happen..." you said sighing as you stretched your arms out. You didn't even see it. It was a simple pinpoint of light hovering near the ceiling just out of your sight. It paused for a moment in your presence before darting directly for you. As it struck you right in the back, you only noticed a warm sensation in your chest momentarily. Taking little heed of it, you went back to your book. You continued reading for a moment when the warmth began to grow into full fledged heat. Was the thermostat up too high? You turned around to see it as it's typical setting and it was night outside so what was happening? That was when you looked at your hands and dropped the book. It was faint but when you held them against the dark brown sofa, you saw they emited a faint white glow. Looking down at yourself, you could see your whole body was the same. "What's going on?" you said starting to become fearful. Something strange happening to you. What will you do?
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Milky Meister
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 4,511
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Re: Interactive story: Divine ascention (growth, beautification, demon TF and more)
This may be a little too cliche, but I guess you should go to the bathroom to examine yourself further.
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#21 |
It's play time!
Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 1,183
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Re: Interactive story: Divine ascention (growth, beautification, demon TF and more)
Running upstairs, you made your way to the bathroom to get a better look at what was going on. Sure enough, your face was beaming with the same glow that seemed to be getting stronger. The warmth was growing as well.
"Ugh...so hot..." you muttered as you tried to limp over to the window to let some air in. As you approached, it seemed like you eyes were playing tricks on you because you swore the window was slowly moving downward... "Ow..." you cried out as a sudden pain pierced your body. That was when you looked to see your once casual clothes now skin tight and cutting into you. As you turned back to the door and walked awkwardly over to it, there was no mistake now. You were bigger...and the glow wasn't to be outdone as it intensified. This is getting stranger. What can you do now?
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#22 |
"My way of thanking you"
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 401
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Re: Interactive story: Divine ascention (growth, beautification, demon TF and more)
Jump in the bathtub and turn on the cold water to try to stifle all of the heat you're feeling.
(Nice to see ya doing another one of these, last ones have been very fun.) |
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#23 |
It's play time!
Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 1,183
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Re: Interactive story: Divine ascention (growth, beautification, demon TF and more)
You wondered if the heat and the growth were connected. Desperate to stop both, you struggled to get your clothes off in hopes of using the bath to cool off. You tried to take your shirt off normally but now there was no room to even get a finger under. Desperate, you simply tore it, feeling somewhat relieved now that you weren't being strangled by it.
"That's better...but the bra still hurts..." As soon as you wrestled your bra off that was proving even more uncomfortable, that was when you saw why. You weren't simply growing, your breasts were swelling even faster than the rest of you. You stared in shock for a moment before your pants finally gave way and tore off you on their own. Snapping out of it, you quickly ran a cold bath to try and sooth whatever this was. "Ugh...that feels a little better...ooh!" The water was helping you calm down. You almost felt like you were going to drift off until the glow became dazzling. "What now?" In response, three red lights appeared and swirled around you as you continued to change. You felt yourself still slowly growing bigger and your body shape changing but it wasn't unpleasant. It was almost like being massaged. Unable to pull yourself to your feet, you only watched as the lights continued their dance until stopping momentarily in front of you and darting straight for your face. Two striking you in each cheek and the third in your forehead. Overwhelmed by all the strange feelings, you blacked out... The feeling of water dripping onto your cheek stirred you. "Ow...what a dream..." You struggled to try and right yourself up only to find yourself restrained. Opening your eyes, you let the light in as your vision cleared up to see why. You were sitting in the tub with your legs and arms stretched outside and your hips wedged in. "Wha...how did the tub get so small?" You looked around to see it wasn't. It was you who was now too big for it. Bracing your arms against the side of the bathtub, you pushed hard to pry yourself out. Finally free, you slowly stood up as much as you could, your head forced to turn to the side to make way. "No way...I must be about 15 feet tall! But how? And...what else happened to me?" You looked at your hands and felt them. Your skin felt like silk and any blemishes and imperfections were gone without a trace. Looking at yourself all over, it was the same. You felt your hair brush against your back which was odd considering it wasn't that long before. You ran your fingers through to find them glide though it like water and it shone like it as well. Looking down, you saw a figure you could only dream of having before...minus being over twice the size you once were of course. You had to look in the mirror to get a better view of this. Staring back at you was still recognizably your face but it shared the same flawless complexion and softer look. Most striking of all was that it now bore odd red markings that glowed softly, a small upside down triangle under each eye and a pair of linking rings on your forehead. "What are they? What do they mean?" you said, surprised at the sound of your voice. Even it now sounded so soothing and other worldly that it almost made you feel more at ease. You sat cross legged in front of the mirror since it was too small to get a good look while standing. You always had decent looks before but now you looked...supernaturally beautiful and seeing the process of becoming such, that probably was a fair assumption. This is beyond strange...what will you do?
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#24 |
"My way of thanking you"
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 401
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Re: Interactive story: Divine ascention (growth, beautification, demon TF and more)
So...Ah My Demoness now is it? :P
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