Midna BE Story

[Forze]

Well, realistically, at least a few of these curses should be stopped...remember, quality of quantity.

[Gaea]

Hmmmm....I think that Zelda should be among the last of the possible cursed people. Oh, and one other thing. Was there some one who said that only one bottle of milk was cursed, or am i imagining things?

OK, some curses'll be stopped- but at least a few others should be cursed.

Yes, I said only one was cursed.

Short new piece.

'' By some unhappy circumstances, Malo had gotten too far ahead. The wind seemed to be against Link and Midna, and though Epona was strong enough to keep up, they never seemed to close in on the other horse ( of course Epona had to carry a man and a by circumstance extraordinarily heavy woman ). Link wondered who has riding the other horse- Malo was too young to ride one- it seemed to be a knight from the Hyrule Castle, and no one he knew. They were headed for the Hyrule Castle Town.

Midna looked around- she could see the other pieces of the curse floating around, not willing to land yet. She hoped it would stay this way until they’d delt with this part- the one to land first, she guessed, would be one hanging low above the Eldin Bridge. Suddenly, Link made Epona go faster, startling Midna a bit. She held on tightly to the horse again. Because of the little space, her breasts almost constantly bounced into Link. Link’s thoughts about anything, the entire adventure, had been in his head and so they stayed this time as well.

Into view came the Hyrule Castle Town- Link was sure that was where Malo was headed. And indeed, in several minutes the horse rode towards the gate. A knight and Malo jumped off and went in the Castle Town. Link, upon ariving by gate a minute later, jumped off his horse leaving Midna on Epona in front of the gate. He hurried to the center of Town, and ran past the fountain right toward the Malo Mart. He opened the door quickly and ran in, and stood there for a moment, panting.

‘‘ ... Hey, Link. What are you doing here...?’’, said Malo, with a surprised look on his face. Link pointed at the diamond, which had been put in a high place for people to look at. ‘‘ Oh... that one is 580 Rupees.’’, said Malo. Link lost his hope- he had not a single Rupee in his wallet. He shrugged his shoulders, and walked out the door again.’’ ''

[cyero]

Malo charges high price, as always. ;P

I suddenly wish I was in Link's place, too. xP

[Forze]

I do wonder how Link, or Midna, is going to earn that money...

[Daichi Azure]

Interesting...Malo's lust for money...but can't wait to see who gets the diamond before Link and Midna do

OK, went back to Lulu to find inspiration for Midna... and I did. Check the new piece out:

'' Lulu fell asleep soon after entering her room- in the safety of her home, the shock of recent events faded quickly. Her dreams, however, were strange. She dreamed about a strange child who got a diamond from a Goron, and later rode away on a horse while a man and a woman on another horse followed- the woman, she could see, had incredibly large breasts that bounced at every step the horse took. She felt her own breasts, and noted they had become larger as well.

The scene changed as a great castle came into view- both horses were headed there. The dream became confused, but ended in a sudden need for 580 Rupees. Lulu had earned many Rupees by singing, but she was unable to give them to the sad man who now left a strange shop. She woke up, a bit confused, but refreshed. She hardly remembered last night, but the dream kept on echoing in her head. She was almost sure that the strange pale girl she had seen was real and knew the answer to her questions.

She started whistling a tune and tried to forget the dream, for she could not influence what happened in her dreams. In six days, Koume and Kotake would be visiting their Zora Hall, and everything would be all right again, she hoped. ‘‘ Still, what kind of magic would cause this...? How could I have been cursed?’’, she wondered. She aimlessly looked around the room when an empty bottle caught her eye. ‘‘ That... that must’ve been the carrier of the curse!’’, she said, realising there was no other possibility.

She felt as though she had to do something, tell somebody, but no answer to what and who came to her mind. The day was still young when her seven babies started making noise, so she directed her attention to them for a long time. Suddenly, there was a knock on the door. ‘‘ Hey, Lulu. It’s Evan. Can I... come in?’’, a voice said. Lulu jumped up from the pool, and looked for her dress. It lay under her bed. She grabbed it, and quickly pulled it over her head, when she noticed she couldn’t pull it over her chest.

Her breasts were too big for the dress at this point. She pulled hard, and it seemed to work, when she heard a creak- her dress was torn to pieces around the chest before she knew it. ‘‘ Uh...’’, she said, not knowing what to do know. Hastily, she jumped in her bed under the bed sheet and lie on her side with her face towards the door. ‘‘ OK, come in.’’, she said. The door was opened and there stood Evan. ‘‘ Still in bed?’’, he said. ‘‘ Just wanted to check if you were alright. That was quite a shock, yesterday.’’, he said.

‘‘ Yes, thanks a lot for your help- thanks the others, too.’’, said Lulu. ‘‘ I’m fine.’’ Evan thought of the whole situation as a bit odd- and he saw the torn pieces of her dress on the ground- yesterday evening he had noticed her dress was fitting tightly, but he hadn’t had time to do more than notice it briefly, because of the LikeLike attack. ‘‘ Well, if you’re sure, I’ll leave you alone...’’, he said, a bit doubtfully. ‘‘ OK, and thanks again.’’, said Lulu, relieved. Evan slowly closed the door, but Lulu saw the doubt in his eyes.

When the door was closed, Lulu remained in bed. She couldn’t hear any footsteps moving away from the door, so she thought Evan was listening. Evan was worried about his band members quickly. Eventually, she did hear footsteps moving away from the door, so she sat up. She looked at her babies, and to her surprise they lay in the shape of a diamond. ‘‘ A diamond in the water...’’, she said thoughtfully to herself, sinking into thought completely.''

[keybladeknight]

this is a great story so far cant wait to read the next part. ijust got an idea why not have one of Zeldas gurds buy the cursed diamond for Zelda but not have the curse take effeact yet what do you think?

[ToboR]

I'm really liking the scenes you describe and how you get into the character's thoughts. The only slight problem I had with Lulu's dream was I wasn't sure where it exactly ended.

[Daichi Azure]

Interesting...very interesting...since she references the diamond....wonder what's going to happen with it now

OK, here's the next part.

'' Link slowly walked through the Castle Town, back to Midna. It was still incredibly busy, and everyone seemed to running around without a goal. He walked out the large gate, to find Midna, still on Epona. ‘‘And?’’, she asked anxiously. Link sighed, and explained ( somehow ) in body language that they would have to pay 580 Rupees for the diamond. ‘‘But... how can we get it then?’’, Midna asked. Link shrugged his shoulders- he had no idea how to get 580 Rupees before this valuable gem would be sold.

‘‘ Maybe, Link, we can trade it for some of my jewelry...’’, said Midna doubtfully. Link knew Malo wouldn’t trade- he would only take 580 Rupees. ‘‘ But we can sell the jewelry, and use the Rupees...’’, said Midna. Link shook his head and walked back to the Town- he could promise Malo to pay the diamond back later, perhaps. He started running- past the fountain and right back to the Malo Mart. He opened the door, and looked for the diamond- but he couldn’t find it anywhere.

He looked at Malo, the question of ‘who’ in his eyes. ‘‘ Oh, hey again, Link...’’, he said. ‘‘ Today’s been a great day for the Malo Mart- sales are going through the roof and we even sold the diamond...’’, he said. Link looked at him, and then at the place where the diamond had been. ‘‘ Oh... the diamond... we sold it to a freaky clown guy...the one with the cannon,,,’’, he said. Link sighed: he knew who this was, and that he had to make haste for Lake Hylia now. He ran out like before, and hurried to the gate through the crowd.

‘‘ And...?’’, Midna asked again. Link climbed on the horse ( Midna was already on it ), and rode off again. ‘‘ Where are we going?’’, Midna asked, already knowing she wouldn’t get an answer. This time, the wind helped them, and Link hurried in the direction of Lake Hylia. Midna was annoyed by the bouncing of her huge breasts, and not knowing where they were going there didn’t seem to be anything they were shooting for, and so it annoyed her more. Before long, they could see the Lake Hylia way down below them.

Soon they came to a narrow road, that led to a do a door. They both got off Epona ( which was somewhat troublesome ), and entered a strange kind of barn- they could hear the Cuccos making a huge amount of noise. Here, Link knew, was the Flight by Foal game, which was led by one of two clown-ish people, and his name was Falbi. He waited in the other side in the room, for people willing to fly to lake Hylia with a Cucco. It struck Link that he had to pay a fee of twenty Rupees to fly down.

He started searching his pockets ( to Midna’s dismay, who realised they needed more Rupees to continue ). He wondered if he could trade the bombs in his bomb bag for a Cucco flight. He He walked to Falbi, who greeted him with the usual ‘‘ Hiiiii!’’, and told him he had to pay 20 Rupees for the most exciting flight in his life. He offered a bomb, but Falbi wouldn’t take it- he shrugged his shoulders. Link stood there, not knowing what to do, when Midna saved him once more.

He heard a series of crashes, like the breaking of pottery, in the other side of the room. Link walked back to Midna. In the pottery, she’d found fifteen Rupees- three blue Rupees to be exact. Link hoped Falbi would give him a 5 Rupee discount- and he walked back to offer the Rupees. ‘‘ All right, but only for this time.’’, Falbi said after a few moments of awkward silence. ‘‘ I’ll wait here until you get back...’’, said Midna. Link nodded, grabbed a Cucco, took a deep breath, and jumped down to Lake Hylia.

The Cucco, fortunately, was very strong and his fall was slow. Far down below him, he could see Fyer’s cannon- and the prizes in treasure chests he could get by landing on the high platforms. He sent the Cucco there, because a lack of Rupees had bothered him too often. With some careful aiming, he landed eventually on the highest platform. A shining treasure chest stood there. He opened it- and to his incredible surprise, there was the diamond. It shone brightly in the setting sun. Apparently, Fyer had given it to Falbi.

He stood there looking at the cursed gem, when suddenly the cannon was fired. Startled, he accidentally dropped the diamond and it rolled in the Lake. Because of the wind, it floated away quickly. ‘‘ The diamond is in the water!’’, he thought in shock. He dived in after it and swam after it as fast as he could... ''