mind control, bimbo transformation

[ederin]

Originally Posted by qzar9999

This has been some intriguing setup. I'm looking forward to the payoff.

I'm wondering, though. It almost seems like the protagonist has sort of become a...I think 'himbo' is the term? His equipment got bigger, he seems kinda hung up on it, his libido has ramped up, and he has trouble focusing on anything due to thoughts of sex. Y'know...essentially the male version of what happens in a bimbo TF. Was this what you're going for, or am I reading too much into it?

I enjoy a good himbo.

To peel back the curtain a bit, making the guy himbo-ize at least somewhat helps from a narrative perspective. Ironically, writing from a more realism perspective makes it necessary to amp up other, unrealistic aspects. First and foremost, I don't care how horny a guy is, there's no way he can handle the demands of a revved up bimboslut, at least not the way I write them. It'd be exhausting. So he needs a sexual booster shot.

Second of all, himboizing the guy goes a long ways towards making him more relatable, strange as that may sound. We're going to be spending a lot of time with Trevor. If he's just a guy who turns his innocent wife into a cock-hungry slut, well, that's kind of a jerk move. Having him share in the confusion and the change makes him less of a sociopath and more a guy who just got in over his head.

I got a bunch of questions along the lines of 'why is TREVOR the one taking a pill that bimboizes his WIFE?' Because drugging your wife for sex is an asshole thing to do! Whereas taking the pill yourself is a lot more like viagra. Plus if he drugs Candace then he also has to drug any other girls he wants to bimboize, which is REALLY socially maladjusted.

So the bottom line is that I really had no choice but to give Trevor a ten inch cock.

[qzar9999]

Originally Posted by ederin

I enjoy a good himbo.

To peel back the curtain a bit, making the guy himbo-ize at least somewhat helps from a narrative perspective. Ironically, writing from a more realism perspective makes it necessary to amp up other, unrealistic aspects. First and foremost, I don't care how horny a guy is, there's no way he can handle the demands of a revved up bimboslut, at least not the way I write them. It'd be exhausting. So he needs a sexual booster shot.

Second of all, himboizing the guy goes a long ways towards making him more relatable, strange as that may sound. We're going to be spending a lot of time with Trevor. If he's just a guy who turns his innocent wife into a cock-hungry slut, well, that's kind of a jerk move. Having him share in the confusion and the change makes him less of a sociopath and more a guy who just got in over his head.

I got a bunch of questions along the lines of 'why is TREVOR the one taking a pill that bimboizes his WIFE?' Because drugging your wife for sex is an asshole thing to do! Whereas taking the pill yourself is a lot more like viagra. Plus if he drugs Candace then he also has to drug any other girls he wants to bimboize, which is REALLY socially maladjusted.

So the bottom line is that I really had no choice but to give Trevor a ten inch cock.

I saw those questions, and I feel like those people missed something very very obvious. Trevor all but expressly states that if she ingests his cum it'll change her. Dunno how they didn't see that.

I do have one qualm, though. You talk about not wanting to make him seem like a jerk/sociopath. That one post, though, where he gives a warning to teenage boys...that one made him sound like a truly horrible person.

I mean, I'm still reading your story. Just sayin'.

[robiotic]

Put up a new bimbo morph last night
http://iamthetransient.deviantart.co...Love-635976257
Also I'm running a Halloween art jam if anyone feels like having a go

[thrandrall]

Originally Posted by robiotic

Put up a new bimbo morph last night
http://iamthetransient.deviantart.co...Love-635976257
Also I'm running a Halloween art jam if anyone feels like having a go

Classy as always. Love the style of these morphs. Keep em up!

[Gatoh Ry?zaki]

Aha, so that porn shop story wasn't forgotten after all! The Pleasure Shoppe, by Limerick! I love how you spend so much time little details, like a character having the name of something. It really adds grounding to your work. There's only one girl this time, though, which sucks, but makes sense given the shorter length.

I also loved the setting. Nothing--aside from the joke about millenials--really makes your works feel like they're written in different eras. There's a rhythm and humor to your writing that makes everything work within the same universe, even if they don't have anything to do with one another. Really good stuff.

Now, I'm just wondering who the hell Buck is...

[mook]

This is, as always, amazing. You are a true talent.

Ever thought of doing Naga Munchetty from BBC Breakfast? She is TOO CUTE!

[mook]

Originally Posted by robiotic

Put up a new bimbo morph last night
http://iamthetransient.deviantart.co...Love-635976257
Also I'm running a Halloween art jam if anyone feels like having a go

This is, as always, amazing. You are a true talent.

Ever thought of doing Naga Munchetty from BBC Breakfast? She is TOO CUTE!

[Chaos Echo]

Probably worth noting - that Buck's Bimbos thing from earlier ended today, so now you can check out the whole thing.

[Gatoh Ry?zaki]

Dang, sad to see Buck's Bimbos end. I was wondering when 'Buck' would appear, but it sucks that the story is now over. The climax felt a little sudden.

[ederin]

Has there been new content I haven't seen over the past several months -- because it's behind a paywall or whatever -- or is this fetish just super dead right now?

[Sutibaru]

Well, I could always plug some of my work that has been done recently. A bit extreme and anthro for some tastes, but it was a commission afterall.

http://fav.me/dao1wz6

[CupOfRamen]

I'm not too sure if this has been shared here yet, but erismanor on DeviantArt has made an excellent comic titled 'Bimbo Hair Curse'.
http://erismanor.deviantart.com/gall...mbo-hair-curse