mind control, bimbo transformation

[spathicblond]

Originally Posted by BillPratt

Looking for a couple test readers to look over a Master PC story I'm going to pitch to the Bimbo Story Club. It'a short, heavy on the mind control and light on the brainlessness.

I'd like to give it a read!

[Amazeroth]

Hey everyone, hope you had a nice Halloween.

I've createt a little Halloween Comic "A lesson in Bimboness" and uploaded it on my DevArt Page. Have fun to read it

https://amaz2k12.deviantart.com/art/...-001-712643683

[BillPratt]

Looking for a few victims to give a read through of what might be an overly long and rambling first draft of a different master PC story from the one above. That one is on hold while I rethink where I'm going with it.

In this one generic loser Ken clicks the wrong link at a file locker and, rather than getting a busty cheerleader porn video, downloads a copy of Master PC. The usual follows with Ken zapping and breast expanding pretty much every woman he encounters.

[checker]

Originally Posted by BillPratt

Looking for a few victims to give a read through of what might be an overly long and rambling first draft of a different master PC story from the one above. That one is on hold while I rethink where I'm going with it.

In this one generic loser Ken clicks the wrong link at a file locker and, rather than getting a busty cheerleader porn video, downloads a copy of Master PC. The usual follows with Ken zapping and breast expanding pretty much every woman he encounters.

I'm game. checker625 at gmail dot com

[MaskBoy]

thehighgrove@gmail.com if you are still looking, Bill!

[BillPratt]

Still looking, but will have to get back to you later. I'm away from the source repository for a while.

[BillPratt]

Toying with an old concept again. Mostly want to see if the first issue of a ten page comic would get readers to come back for more.

Title: PRON
Conceit: Herb is sucked into a computer and forced to play video games. But these aren't yo daddy's video games

Forgot the question: Anyone want to give it a read and comment?

[_aliased]

Wasn't sure where to put this due to the themes (Surgery, TG/TS, Bimbo) but here it goes:

Some of you may be aware of the Orchid Garden series of comics from Lustomic that Sarath drew.
The Black Garden is a completely new illustrated story based on some of the aforementioned title's themes.

The Black Garden is a privately funded and operated correctional facility with a secondary function, to assist in the rehabilitation of inmates back into modern society aided by body modification and psychological conditioning. Without the restrictions and oversight required by either the government or public sector, bleeding edge human experimentation is once again possible…

The footage shown here details the transformation of one of our control groups. Changes are not made to the general population until the process has been stabilized. Our garden has many flowers blooming… and with a couple of modifications you can take any color of flower and breed pink ones.

It is now available for $3.99 here: https://healthyfetish.itch.io/pink-carnations

[j3st3r]

Ok so I picked this up a while ago and here's my thoughts:

1. Says 30 pages, is actually about 10 - 15 as every other page is just a sentence of text over the previous image giving narrative

2. There's zero reaction to their new bodies and no aftermath. Also mental changes are mentioned but no process depicted.


That said the art style is pretty nice and well drawn. But can't help Feel like it stopped short a bit.

[_aliased]

Originally Posted by j3st3r

Ok so I picked this up a while ago and here's my thoughts:

1. Says 30 pages, is actually about 10 - 15 as every other page is just a sentence of text over the previous image giving narrative

2. There's zero reaction to their new bodies and no aftermath. Also mental changes are mentioned but no process depicted.


That said the art style is pretty nice and well drawn. But can't help Feel like it stopped short a bit.

Thanks for the feedback.

This is an illustrated story, so your first point is accurate we intended for it to flow like a Doujin CG set, not a comic.

[mb78]

Recently completed 5th chapter of The Bimbo's Curse posted here: https://adiabaticcombustion.deviantart.com/

Always excellent work there.

[Lurkergg]

Cause not enough people still post on this thread.
Here is something I did for my monthly patreon transformation sequence.

Individual pics found here http://lurkergg.tumblr.com/post/170997577612