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![]() Thanks for your compliments. I better get to Anju- as soon as I have the time and inspiration. That might as well be in seven minutes as in seven days... |
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<3
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OK, here comes another slow-paced piece. Just talking and some observations, but important to the plot.
'' The afternoon was fading, and Anju wiped the sweat of her forehead. It was very warm. She blamed it on the sweatiness that her small sized clothes didn’t seem to fit properly. Suddenly the door opened and a pale skinned girl with a bust size she had never seen before stepped in. She wore a tight black bra and her red eyes shone brightly. Anju rubbed in her eyes and the girl was gone. The door had never opened- it had been a disturbing vision. She wondered if it was a bad omen. Evening drew near when the door opened again. Anju half expected to see another voloptuous girl walk in, but it was her husband, Kafei. He looked so relieved upon her sight that Anju almost imagined he’d expected to find her dead. ‘‘ Anju...’’, he said in a breathless voice. ‘‘ In the Great Bay... the girl who got cursed...she says you have been cursed.’’, he said. Anju was too confused to be scared. ‘‘ How would a girl in the Great Bay know me?’’, she said., trying to understand pieces of the puzzle. ‘‘ The girl who had been cursed told me she had a vision of you and another girl... Cremia, I think.’’, Kafei answered after some silence, as he was still catching his breath. Now, a heavy weight lay on Anju’s heart. ‘‘ Am I going to... die?’’, she asked, exposing her heart to Kafei. ‘‘ I think not. The curse’s effects are not quite clear to me... when I asked, the girl more or less avoided the question. She asked me if I saw anything particularly outstanding about her...’’, he said, half in thought. ‘‘ Was there anything special about her...?’’, Anju asked. ‘‘ Well...’’, Kafei said, wondering if what he had seen was what the girl meant. ‘‘ It was her figure, maybe. Combining what she said with body language, I’m almost sure she referred to her body.’’, he said, not plainly speaking what he thought. ‘‘ Her figure? As in... female shapes? Roundness?’’, Anju asked, understanding Kafei’s hints. Kafei nodded. Anju pondered this. It came to her like a shock that this was a very good explanation for the strange fact that her clothes were tight. ‘‘ Have... have you observed... any changes... in...?’’, Kafei asked, being very careful not to offend Anju. ‘‘ I’m afraid so... but very slight.’’, she admitted. Kafei looked quite worried. ‘‘ I was adviced to find someone who knows a lot about magic. But first I’ll find Cremia, the other cursed girl. Whatever it takes, I will stop this curse!’’, he vowed. Anju admired her husband for his determination, and nodded and smiled. ‘‘ Thank you...’’, she said. She kissed him, and he left. The sun had gone down almost completely. Throughout the evening, Anju noticed her clothes weren’t just tight, but now uncomfortably tight. Time passed even slower than usual, it seemed, and her dress was less and less comfortable. She expected no one to come n, so she felt her breasts. She gasped- they were indeed bigger than they were, and a significant amount too. She felt her hips and buttocks. ‘‘ Am I going crazy, or are they a bit bigger too?’’, she wondered. In that moment the whole nature of the curse was revealed to her. She went to bed in great worry. She went back to her room, pondering. She wondered, as she took off her clothes- would they fit at all tomorrow?'' |
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a heavy weight lay on Anju’s heart.
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Question: Is Kafei a child or an adult?
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#342 |
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ADULT; THE CURSE WAS REVERSED.
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#343 |
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#344 |
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I've really enjoyed the new parts. Keep up the great work.
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Ha, ha, ha! I wondered if you'd see the parallel.
![]() And yes, Kafei's an adult. And thank you guys ![]() Should the curse be lifted from someone soon? Or shall we wait and let the curse have it's way more first? |
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I vote to let the curse keep going for right now.
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I'm thinking perhaps Cremia should have her curse lifted soon? Whereas Anju is progressing slowly, we've already seen the effects on her.
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New part with Ilia. This part is what happened while Link and Midna were off to the Eldin Bridge.
''Ilia walked home. She heard Epona ride away in the distance. The diamond in her hand- it shone remarkably bright in her hand. The busty girl had insisted on her keeping the gem a secret. But who had that been? She heard the children playing- they would immediatly notice the diamond in her hand. She hid it in her pocket, and walked back to her home. The weather was delightful and many inhabitants of the Ordon Village were outside. They all greeted her and she greeted back, but she was mostly in thought. Though the sun was going down rapidly, no one had gone to bed yet. Ilia quietly went indoors, and to her own bedroom. There, she took the diamond out of her pocket- and dropped it immediatly. She looked at her hand- drops of blood came from her fingers. Upon closer examination, the diamond had somehow ‘‘grown’’ spikes. She left the diamond on the floor and bandaged her hand first. Then she went back to the diamond. It’s spikes were longer- it had ‘‘spiked’’ itself in the wooden floor. Pushing it with her bare foot was not a very good idea. She sat on her bed and thought for a while- her father probably had some gloves. The diamond shone strangely in the light of the setting sun that came through Ilia’s window. She went out of her own room to search for some gloves. And fortunately, she could find them rather quickly, but as she went back to her own room the sun went under completely. Darkness filled the Ordon Village, and the many heard voices became few. With the thick gloves, she tried once more to move the diamond- but not with all her strength could she move it. It’s discovery would be inevitable. Suddenly she heard the door open. ‘‘ Ilia, are you here?’’, she heard her father’s voice ask. ‘‘ Yes, I am.’’, she answered. ‘‘ OK. I’m going to bed now, so good night.’’, he said. ‘‘ Okay, good night.’’, she answered, relieved not to have to explain why a spikey diamond was stuck in her bedroom floor. She decided to visit the Ordon Spring before going to bed. She went out, hearing her father snoring. She quietly walked past all the houses, and finally past Link’s house. Then she reached the Ordon Spring. It was already past midnight, but she longed for bathing in it’s water. And so she washed her hands and face in the Ordon Spring, and then bathed her feet in it. She stood up, and slowly started walking back. She was back among the houses when she heard a horse- it stopped shortly after she had started hearing it. She heard the busty woman talking. She wondered if she wanted to go back. She caught something of what they said. That she’d notice something of a curse before the day had begun. She wondered what it meant- but she suddenly felt sleep become her master. She quickly headed home, and went to her bed, worried and confused thoughts whirling through her head. She, without thinking about it, observed that her clothes were tight. She had no idea what this meant yet.'' |
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