Metroid Addventure, anything goes

[Sparks]

Originally Posted by lmorgado

Though this Interactive story is promising, there is another that has transformations about Samus. It's called 'Metroid: Hall of Upgrades' and it's on the Writing.com website. It's about Samus Aran picking an upgrade from a wide assortment and changing into that upgrade. So far, it's really promising from her turning into animals, inanimate objects, regressing in age, and turning into different versions (teacher, nun, angel, etc.) If you want to see it for yourself and begin writing, here's the link:

Metroid: Hall of Upgrades

Oh yes, that one. It says "based on" but the majority of it is straight up copied and pasted directly from my gallery without my permission or asking me at all, with some original stuff added on in some branches. It's not really a big enough deal to get upset over, particularly since the whole series is just something I did for fun while practicing my writing, but please keep it in mind, and a most of them are cut into multiple episodes to accommodate the format.

[brickware]

I've writing on a few of the threads but for some reason everything I write ends up in one annoying to read block even when I space the sentences and paragraphs out before hand.

Any help?

[PyroWildcat]

Originally Posted by brickware

I've writing on a few of the threads but for some reason everything I write ends up in one annoying to read block even when I space the sentences and paragraphs out before hand.

Any help?

The BE Addventure works off of HTML. That means you either have to enclose each paragraph in <p></p> tags, or place a <br> tag everywhere you intended to place a line break(there's actually a checkbox you can use to do this automatically).

By the by, I and a couple other people have been adding a fair amount to the One Piece storyline I mentioned a few posts up. I've mostly been working on starting up or paving the way for as many different storylines as possible, though there are a couple storylines that have gone pretty far along, like one where Nami and Robin run afoul of a cursed treasure, and one where Domino has to deal with an expansion-causing escapee.

[brickware]

Ah thank you very much. I will be using the checkbox from now on as I didn't realize that it was because of that.

Also I will checkout the One piece storyline and see if I can contribute anything to it.