Gecko Girl

[ohiotfguy]

Just out of curiosity, are you ever going to make the second part of your rabbit TF or did you lose interest?

Also This new sequence is quite good BTW

[Shadow_Dragon]

Wish I had a credit card...

[jellox_2000]

I was wondering the same thing as ohiotfguy though the recent stuff is great too.

[BlackMongoose]

Awesome as always!

[jollyjack]

Originally Posted by ohiotfguy

Just out of curiosity, are you ever going to make the second part of your rabbit TF or did you lose interest?

I kind of held off on part 2 because it's a little more graphic than the usual Apsara material, so it has to be made available via other channels.
I will get around to finishing it soon, though.

Very good, mr. Jollyjack. And somewhat different from the majority of your work. Usually, I would try to think up critique, but I cannot find any flaws.

[PrBlahBlahtson]

Originally Posted by x†xShadow_Dragonx†x

Wish I had a credit card...

Look around near the checkout of a Wal-Mart or other large retailer. Some of them stock what is essentially a rechargable credit card. You pay a cash amount + a fee and the card is charged the amount you put on it. So, say with $12 you can put $10 on the card. Almost enough for five pieces from Apsara.

[rocketman78900]

great stuff, as always.

BUT i have the same issue with it as i do with a lot of jollyjack's stuff. i like the person looking more human at the end of the tf, rather than being big and monstrous. the girl at the end of "bunnies" is perfect imo, for example. am i the only one who feels this way?

[blackvelvetrpg]

Originally Posted by theshoelace

... Usually, I would try to think up critique, but I cannot find any flaws.

I'm sure it has some,but I've found over the years very few artists
or writers provide meaningful guidance on what they would like
me to shred.

From what I've heard on tsa-talk they used to have lots of commentary
on submitted stories in the late 1990's till Oren Otter attacked commentators
who harshly commented on his creations.At which point reader
interactions slid downhill.

I find most creatives say some useless thing such as
"comments Please"

rather then providing directions on just whats supposed to be
commented on.

if they can't be bothered providing the guidance,I can't be
bothered playing the role of the drooling fan.

[mushroompanda]

i wish i could buy it =(

[Sephie]

Originally Posted by blackvelvetrpg

I'm sure it has some,but I've found over the years very few artists
or writers provide meaningful guidance on what they would like
me to shred.

From what I've heard on tsa-talk they used to have lots of commentary
on submitted stories in the late 1990's till Oren Otter attacked commentators
who harshly commented on his creations.At which point reader
interactions slid downhill.

I find most creatives say some useless thing such as
"comments Please"

rather then providing directions on just whats supposed to be
commented on.

if they can't be bothered providing the guidance,I can't be
bothered playing the role of the drooling fan.

I personally prefer people to point out plot inconsistencies, spelling errors (I cane knot spill two god wish oat a spill cheek), unbelievability, character problems. I don't mind if people point out what I did well, but I tend to know that already.

[PrBlahBlahtson]

Originally Posted by mushroompanda

i wish i could buy it =(

You can't?

Originally Posted by PrBlahBlahtson

Look around near the checkout of a Wal-Mart or other large retailer. Some of them stock what is essentially a rechargable credit card. You pay a cash amount + a fee and the card is charged the amount you put on it. So, say with $12 you can put $10 on the card. Almost enough for five pieces from Apsara.