Midna BE Story - Page 31

Daichi Azure · 08-04-2008

Well since the curse is gaining strength...It would seem right that some other changes other than weight gain would be applicable. Illia since she's obesssed with Epona...well...

08-04-2008

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Originally Posted by Daichi Azure

Well since the curse is gaining strength...It would seem right that some other changes other than weight gain would be applicable. Illia since she's obesssed with Epona...well...

... Horse transformation? ...
I'm not sure if anyone else who reads this story'll agree... if they do, I will of course, but it has to wait until I hear more voices about it.

Daichi Azure · 08-04-2008

yeah...wonder where the others are at...they usually say something by now...

08-04-2008

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Originally Posted by Daichi Azure

yeah...wonder where the others are at...they usually say something by now...

Whatever. If the others disagree, I could write a small story about a horse TF for Ilia that has nothing to do with this story. While we wait for the others I have one more question- to what extent do you like horse TFs? Really slight- like ear, skin, and tail- or full tf? Or something in-between?

Forze · 08-04-2008

Well, you already know that I hate any sort of TF's, so count me out on rooting for the horse.

cyero · 08-04-2008

Never heard of a horse TF, and all I like is cowgirl anyway.

Daichi Azure · 08-04-2008

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Originally Posted by theshoelace

Whatever. If the others disagree, I could write a small story about a horse TF for Ilia that has nothing to do with this story. While we wait for the others I have one more question- to what extent do you like horse TFs? Really slight- like ear, skin, and tail- or full tf? Or something in-between?

slight TF, legsand tail...but it's up to you though....but the tail she can hide easily by passing it off as part of her clothes...

GLaDOS · 08-04-2008

Ehh. TFs aren't normally my thing, but you're the writer, make it how you like it.
It seems to turn out best when you do that.

spidey0527 · 08-04-2008

I'm not usually a fan of transformations like that, but minor ones are okay. Like ears and tails. But it really doesn't matter to me.

I agree that you should do what you think is best.

08-04-2008

OK- that means no horse transformation. I was neutral about it, so what's best is what the majority likes.
Daichi Azure, I might write a story apart for you. Keep an eye on the Transformation board.

... I should be gettin' back to Ilia.

08-05-2008

New Ilia piece.

'' Ilia tried to catch sleep; but the odd diamond shone brightly even with only the moonlight to reflect. It seemed to willingly tease her- if she turned the other way or pulled the sheet over her head it seemed to shine thrice as bright, so she saw it anyway. More and more, she had the urge to get rid of it: and strangely, it almost seemed as if the diamond wanted to get rid of Ilia. She turned back to it- it was no longer attached to the floor- it simply lay there, smooth and still reflecting the light like the moon itself- as though it could see the sun through the night.

Ilia lay still to think when she noticed her heartbeat was slightly faster than usual. There was almost no difference, and yet there was. Often when she lay still and thought, she could hear her heart, and many times had she counted the heartbeats while laying still. A very weak feeling- one that she could only notice when absolutely still and concentrated- ran through her veins. She decided to blame it on the irritation the diamond caused, and she threw her pillow on the gem.

Though from under the pillow, it shone much brighter, the pillow still offered more protection than her bare eyes. She pulled the sheet over her eyes, and so the light was nearly blocked. She fell in an unpeaceful sleep involving a girl in an inn and a girl on a farm. The next day she woke up, feeling quite refreshed. She stepped out of bed, and got dressed. She looked at the pillow on the floor, and picked it up. For a second she thought the diamond was gone- but when she looked closely, it was still there.

It reflected no light whatsoever, and seemed invisible- it looked like a piece of glass, while yesterday it had looked like a gem. She became aware of whispers outside, and listened. Midna and Link had quietly walked to her door, and were discussing what to do. ?Link, we could knock, but what if her father opens the door? A voloptuous Twili is not exactly common in this town,? she said. Link hated to disturb the mayor so early in the morning, and he didn?t know what to do- in answer he shrugged his shoulders.

Ilia quickly got dressed, and noticed that wasn?t so easy to do quickly. ?Agh!?, she said, after pulling her clothes over her chest. Her breasts left a strangely obvious imprint in her shirt, where they had not done so before. She, not too troubled, picked up the diamond and hurried for the door after this discovery. It had the same shape as before, but this was hardly noticable because of it?s perfect transparancy. Ilia opened the door, startling both Link and Midna. ? Good morning,? she said. ? I kept it safe as I promised- but could you please explain more??

? We better go to a quiet place,?, said Midna. ? The best place to go would be the Ordon Spring,? answered Ilia. The three of them headed there- looking around, they saw the village was still asleep. It was so quiet they could hear goats in the distance. The birds sang their quiet songs in a language that Link knew he could understand if he were a wolf. So, they came to the edge of the Faron Woods, in the Ordon Spring. There, they said by the shallow water and started explaining.

They went through their adventure until Zant had released an ancient curse on Midna, which fortunately did not kill her. Before the curse could be completed, she took milk- but the curse then made her breasts grow. After a long story they came where the Imp curse was lifted, and then to the Palace of Twilight where the curse was removed from Midna- but not destroyed- it had escaped in many directions, and Midna pointed out where some pieces of the curse still floated high in the sky.

Then they came to the diamond. Ilia?s jaw dropped at hearing she was cursed. ? So, I will have the same figure as you?,? she asked Midna, forgetting a slight impoliteness in her question. ? In time- and if we don?t lift the curse soon, you could be a lot... bigger,? Midna answered. Ilia was scared now. ? How do we lift this curse?,? she asked, hoping to hear something relieving. ? We?re not sure- the scroll said you need a damaged or weak sample of the curse to stop the curse itself,? Midna answered.

? I was cursed by a potion, and a potion is easy to weaken; that simply happens in time. But this diamond might be a whole lot harder to even damage a little bit,? Midna said. Link grabbed his bomb bag. Ilia gave him the diamond ( Midna was careful not to touch it ). He lay it down, and surrounded it with bombs. Nine to be exact. They all walked a distance away from it and Link shot an arrow- the explosion was deafening and it woke up the people in the nearest houses.

Some seconds later, the diamond fell back on the earth- upon examination it didn?t have the slightest scratch. The three were puzzled: How could this part of the curse be stopped?''

Forze · 08-05-2008

Very good part of the story! You captured the essence of insomnia very well at that one part.

I find it interesting that none of the girls thus far are happy at all about their new found figure!

08-04-2008	#361
Daichi Azure Fourm Firefighter Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 962	Re: Midna BE Story Well since the curse is gaining strength...It would seem right that some other changes other than weight gain would be applicable. Illia since she's obesssed with Epona...well...

08-04-2008	#363
Daichi Azure Fourm Firefighter Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 962	Re: Midna BE Story yeah...wonder where the others are at...they usually say something by now...

08-04-2008	#365
Forze Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 108	Re: Midna BE Story Well, you already know that I hate any sort of TF's, so count me out on rooting for the horse.

08-04-2008	#366
cyero Sir Psycho Sexy Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 2,955	Re: Midna BE Story Never heard of a horse TF, and all I like is cowgirl anyway.

08-04-2008	#368
GLaDOS Lurker Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 13	Re: Midna BE Story Ehh. TFs aren't normally my thing, but you're the writer, make it how you like it. It seems to turn out best when you do that.

08-04-2008	#369
spidey0527 Lurker Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 12	Re: Midna BE Story I'm not usually a fan of transformations like that, but minor ones are okay. Like ears and tails. But it really doesn't matter to me. I agree that you should do what you think is best.

08-04-2008	#370
theshoelace Guest Posts: n/a	Re: Midna BE Story OK- that means no horse transformation. I was neutral about it, so what's best is what the majority likes. Daichi Azure, I might write a story apart for you. Keep an eye on the Transformation board. ... I should be gettin' back to Ilia.

08-05-2008	#371
theshoelace Guest Posts: n/a	Re: Midna BE Story New Ilia piece. '' Ilia tried to catch sleep; but the odd diamond shone brightly even with only the moonlight to reflect. It seemed to willingly tease her- if she turned the other way or pulled the sheet over her head it seemed to shine thrice as bright, so she saw it anyway. More and more, she had the urge to get rid of it: and strangely, it almost seemed as if the diamond wanted to get rid of Ilia. She turned back to it- it was no longer attached to the floor- it simply lay there, smooth and still reflecting the light like the moon itself- as though it could see the sun through the night. Ilia lay still to think when she noticed her heartbeat was slightly faster than usual. There was almost no difference, and yet there was. Often when she lay still and thought, she could hear her heart, and many times had she counted the heartbeats while laying still. A very weak feeling- one that she could only notice when absolutely still and concentrated- ran through her veins. She decided to blame it on the irritation the diamond caused, and she threw her pillow on the gem. Though from under the pillow, it shone much brighter, the pillow still offered more protection than her bare eyes. She pulled the sheet over her eyes, and so the light was nearly blocked. She fell in an unpeaceful sleep involving a girl in an inn and a girl on a farm. The next day she woke up, feeling quite refreshed. She stepped out of bed, and got dressed. She looked at the pillow on the floor, and picked it up. For a second she thought the diamond was gone- but when she looked closely, it was still there. It reflected no light whatsoever, and seemed invisible- it looked like a piece of glass, while yesterday it had looked like a gem. She became aware of whispers outside, and listened. Midna and Link had quietly walked to her door, and were discussing what to do. ?Link, we could knock, but what if her father opens the door? A voloptuous Twili is not exactly common in this town,? she said. Link hated to disturb the mayor so early in the morning, and he didn?t know what to do- in answer he shrugged his shoulders. Ilia quickly got dressed, and noticed that wasn?t so easy to do quickly. ?Agh!?, she said, after pulling her clothes over her chest. Her breasts left a strangely obvious imprint in her shirt, where they had not done so before. She, not too troubled, picked up the diamond and hurried for the door after this discovery. It had the same shape as before, but this was hardly noticable because of it?s perfect transparancy. Ilia opened the door, startling both Link and Midna. ? Good morning,? she said. ? I kept it safe as I promised- but could you please explain more?? ? We better go to a quiet place,?, said Midna. ? The best place to go would be the Ordon Spring,? answered Ilia. The three of them headed there- looking around, they saw the village was still asleep. It was so quiet they could hear goats in the distance. The birds sang their quiet songs in a language that Link knew he could understand if he were a wolf. So, they came to the edge of the Faron Woods, in the Ordon Spring. There, they said by the shallow water and started explaining. They went through their adventure until Zant had released an ancient curse on Midna, which fortunately did not kill her. Before the curse could be completed, she took milk- but the curse then made her breasts grow. After a long story they came where the Imp curse was lifted, and then to the Palace of Twilight where the curse was removed from Midna- but not destroyed- it had escaped in many directions, and Midna pointed out where some pieces of the curse still floated high in the sky. Then they came to the diamond. Ilia?s jaw dropped at hearing she was cursed. ? So, I will have the same figure as you?,? she asked Midna, forgetting a slight impoliteness in her question. ? In time- and if we don?t lift the curse soon, you could be a lot... bigger,? Midna answered. Ilia was scared now. ? How do we lift this curse?,? she asked, hoping to hear something relieving. ? We?re not sure- the scroll said you need a damaged or weak sample of the curse to stop the curse itself,? Midna answered. ? I was cursed by a potion, and a potion is easy to weaken; that simply happens in time. But this diamond might be a whole lot harder to even damage a little bit,? Midna said. Link grabbed his bomb bag. Ilia gave him the diamond ( Midna was careful not to touch it ). He lay it down, and surrounded it with bombs. Nine to be exact. They all walked a distance away from it and Link shot an arrow- the explosion was deafening and it woke up the people in the nearest houses. Some seconds later, the diamond fell back on the earth- upon examination it didn?t have the slightest scratch. The three were puzzled: How could this part of the curse be stopped?''

08-05-2008	#372
Forze Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 108	Re: Midna BE Story Very good part of the story! You captured the essence of insomnia very well at that one part. I find it interesting that none of the girls thus far are happy at all about their new found figure!