More general 'increased beauty'

[GLKnight83]

Yikes!

Most of those girls didn't have any real beautifying effect, just "without makeup" and "get me another crate".

Wow...

[bstgate]

I made a morph.
(Unzip and open HTML file to play.)

Original was taken from www.domai.com

[GLKnight83]

It's good, but it's a little short and quick for most people's taste.

On your next one, trying giving her an overall "glow" of health. Even the skin tone, firm up some spots (like around the hips), things of that nature.

[lampy]

I like that bstgate.

[lampy]

http://zeddieddi.deviantart.com/art/...orms-129266653

[Ryse]

3:30 and again at 5:20

[personEL]

Originally Posted by Vengeance1701

As far as I know, there are absolutely no plans to continue this....

...which is a shame. Still...

Around the time that the hottiefied girl was thrown into an all-male cell and she was, shall we say, passed around like a joint at a high school party, the story completely lost me. The fun started to recede with the principal, but this was the breaking point. Stories like this should be, I don't know, fun, not disturbing. Ultimately, I found that I was reading about an innocent girl suffering through disproportionate punishment for a minor transgression (and even then, I'm stretching the definition). Maybe people who loved Drag Me to Hell would enjoy this, but I just couldn't.

Her friend turned out pretty nice, though, even if we never ended up seeing the 'Carlos' that made her into a rich glamourpuss.

I'm not faulting the art, by any means; it was superb. The story that the art was used to tell, however...

[Vengeance1701]

Yeah, the art, as always, is fantastic.

I'll have to ask them what they thought of the story they illustrated...it'd be interesting to find out.

[Snowglare]

Originally Posted by lampy

http://zeddieddi.deviantart.com/art/...orms-129266653

Hawt! Shame it's on lined paper. Technically more of a bimbo TF.

[Esquire]

Originally Posted by personEL

...which is a shame. Still...

Around the time that the hottiefied girl was thrown into an all-male cell and she was, shall we say, passed around like a joint at a high school party, the story completely lost me. The fun started to recede with the principal, but this was the breaking point. Stories like this should be, I don't know, fun, not disturbing. Ultimately, I found that I was reading about an innocent girl suffering through disproportionate punishment for a minor transgression (and even then, I'm stretching the definition). Maybe people who loved Drag Me to Hell would enjoy this, but I just couldn't.

Her friend turned out pretty nice, though, even if we never ended up seeing the 'Carlos' that made her into a rich glamourpuss.

I'm not faulting the art, by any means; it was superb. The story that the art was used to tell, however...

This. The part that really bugged me is when she finally had her memory erased. Up until that point, she had one or two bouts of what I'll call "sluttishness", but suddenly she's okay with what's basically gang-rape?

[thrandrall]

Originally Posted by Vengeance1701

Yeah, the art, as always, is fantastic.

I'll have to ask them what they thought of the story they illustrated...it'd be interesting to find out.

Yeah....most SRU stories are fairly "clean" - or at least good-natured - but that didn't follow too many of the actual standards. Heck, the wizard didn't even look like what you'd imagine - "wizard in a bathrobe" - more like "evil, dirty old man". Store itself was very much less than I would have expected.

So yeah, the art was good. The story started out well - and went downhill very quickly. Much more graphically portrayed than I would have liked as well.

[godleydemon]

yeah really the art is good but I don't think they did a good job with the story line. Ended to... rough? is that the word I'm looking for?