10-02-2011 | #5485 |
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10-03-2011 | #5487 |
Mind Control Artist HMB
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Thought I should let anyone who's interested know that I'm open for commissions right now.
If interested we can discuss rates and ideas at mrharrymanback@gmail.com In the meantime feel free to check out my blog http://hmbartblog.blogspot.com/ |
10-03-2011 | #5488 |
No Man's Slave
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10-03-2011 | #5489 |
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10-03-2011 | #5490 |
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Voltronzilla, I just finished reading your work and I personaly will say I see alot of talent. But I want to give you 1 tip that will improve your work maybe alot perhaps. just my personal opinion thought, not meant as critics.
Increase your story lenght by about 33%, overall it seams your stories just "end" to soon, devoloping your story ends a bit stronger will improve quality alot and make good work perhaps amazing. Also maybe a bit on the process of the corruption a bit more, but you do it amazing in some of your works so I would probably say just try to write it a little longer so it dont feel so rushed ended. Writing more on the corruption itself and extend the events after a little bit is probably what I personaly feel is missing, but still good work. Liked reading them. |
10-04-2011 | #5491 |
Samus Fanboy
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Argh, so many stories and I'm only familiar with two of the characters.
Hope to see more. Kindly update us here if you write again.
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10-05-2011 | #5492 |
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It's probably going to be a while before I do any more writing.
I'm kind of out of ideas at the moment, and I'm busy with IRL stuff. and I'm busy with video game stuff. and I'm busy with reading the entire A Song of Ice and Fire series stuff. I just got to the part in A Clash of Kings where Jon captures a wildling and reenacts that one scene from Miller's Crossing. I will, however, post this picture of Lashette Goldwell from Justice Blade 3 delightfully having her brain scrambled: |
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I already know about the Red Wedding and the Lady Stoneheart thing, if that's what you're referring to.
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10-07-2011 | #5495 |
No Man's Slave
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I just learned that there's a sequence in Dragon's Lair II where Princess Daphne gets turned into a nasty pig-creature and tries to eat Dirk.
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10-07-2011 | #5496 |
Just a wanderer
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How I hated Dragon's Lair. Especially the action-based one. I think it was 'Time Warp' or something. Back when I was a kid, the intro/explanation before getting into the game, and the fact that when Dirk lost a life, he would first appear as a skeleton before 'respawning', scared the heck out of me.
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