mind control, bimbo transformation

[robiotic]

Thanks guys! Was really worried it'd just get dismissed.
Know it's something a bit different for me, but I kind of hope to make a few more stories along these lines.
Thanks again

[Vengeance1701]

Huh, did not see this at all, Robiotic.

It's excellent!

[avaro]

Thanks all for your support ^^

[olddude12]

A great, slow story from you, Robiotic, and an excellent sequence from Avaro.

This story is a bit of a long read, but very well done.

http://www.mcstories.com/FiveEasyPieces/index.html

[Vengeance1701]

Good story, old bimbo dude!

[olddude12]

Originally Posted by Vengeance1701

Good story, old bimbo dude!

Good god, the mental imagery!

[processfan]

Great story

[robiotic]

Fresh off the wordpad, just added the sequel to "Chain".
http://www.foreverchanging.org/bb/vi...php?f=10&t=866
Hope you guys like it as much as the first.

[Vengeance1701]

Fantastic and now on to your bread and butter... TG bimboization!

[blackshirtboy]

Aside from a scant few spelling mistakes and a few fumblings it's a great sequel, love where you're going with the story.

[robiotic]

Thanks guys ^^; Crap, thought I'd covered all the spelling mistakes.
Admittedly there were a few parts that could have been structured slightly better, but I think it was a solid sequel.
Going by the laws of film though, I don't think I can keep that same originality going for a 3rd.

Think it makes the most sense just keep it as the two with the 3rd being something the readers can imagine for themselves, and perhaps move on to another story.

Part of me wants to do something sci-fi based, or possibly straight up B-Movie plot.

Invasion of the body snatchers, Stepford, The Faculty, something along these lines with maybe an element of Jekyll and Hyde (mainly around the split personality disorder) added.

[blackshirtboy]

sci fi B movie with TG how could you possibly go wrong with such a winning combination? XD