Midna BE Story

[wafflecannon19]

Very good story here, I just think the lack of reference to the size of Midna's breasts makes the story difficult to visualize. I know that Huzus already brought this up, but size comparison is essential in a BE story.

I really do hope to see you continue this, so press on my friend!

[GLaDOS]

As per reading your above statement Shoelace,
I to like the Twili Midna option as well (Hey, I'm a fan of the form =P)
But in effort of making your life easy, just continue on with this line and whenever you finish make a one-shot. Just an idea.
But this is good writing. keep it up please.

Originally Posted by GLaDOS

As per reading your above statement Shoelace,
I to like the Twili Midna option as well (Hey, I'm a fan of the form =P)
But in effort of making your life easy, just continue on with this line and whenever you finish make a one-shot. Just an idea.
But this is good writing. keep it up please.

I guess I'll make an alternate second part of the story as well, then, seeing so many like the other option.

Thank you much for your compliment.

'Kay then. Here's some more:

'' Link stared at the fairies, feeling a bit sad for Midna. Midna also stared at the fairies, not necessarily sad, but troubled. They heard a noise, and both Midna and Link quickly turned around. They saw that the gate had been closed, and they saw a dark figure run off. Midna noticed he was wearing a cloak. ‘‘Link, do you think that was our friend from the marketplace?’’, Midna asked. Link shrugged his shoulders. ‘‘ Link, how will we get out of here?’’, asked Midna. Link smiled at her.

He walked towards a hole and started crawling through it. ‘‘ Link! My front nor backside would fit through there’’, she said. Link didn’t seem to hear her since he crawled on. She sighed, and sat on her knees. She tried to crawl in the hole backwards, but her buttocks could not possibly fit through there. ‘‘ Ugh... I’m supposed to be the Twilight Princess, not a Twilight Hourglass.’’, she said, putting her hands on her buttocks which were indeed considerably bigger than before. She crawled out of the hole again.

Then she saw the gate was being opened by Link. She sighed with relief, and she quickly went towards him. ‘‘ Uh... Link? Maybe we should search the rest of Ordon. It’s the only clue we have, you know.’’, she said. Link nodded, and he walked back towards the Ordon Village. It was quiet and the moon was high in the sky. The animals were completely silent and this disturbed Link who had lived in this town for many years.There was a presence though. Link felt as though he was being watched, but it was Midna who saw something first.

She whispered: ‘‘Link, over there!’’, pointing to a dark figure that slipped up the hill towards the ranch. Link grabbed his clawshot, but the figure had already disppeared over the hill. Link grabbed his bow, and followed- and Midna followed him. After some time, Link stood on top of the hill, looking for any movement in the ranch. He saw a few goats, eating grass in silence, but nothing else alive. Then he saw something at last. If he concentrated hard, he could that someone was hiding behind the goats.

‘‘ Link, do you see something?’’, Midna asked. Link nodded and pointed at the goats. He got an arrow from his quiver, and aimed as well as he could on a foot he could see next to the goat. He released the arrow, and a loud shriek followed, and all the goats panicked. Link lost no time and ran at who he had hit. ‘‘Ow... ow...’’, said a voice. It was a cloaked hooded figure. Link threw his hood off. It was the same man they saw at the market, who had led them here. ‘‘You... why did you try to lock us up? What are you trying to do?!’’ said Midna.

‘‘ Ow... you... lock you up?’’, said the man. ‘‘ I don’t know what you’re talking about, but I was trying to find a medicine to help you by examining these goats. But how can I possibly keep examing with this incredible pain in my foot?!’’, he said angrily. Link looked very ashamed, but Midna asked: ‘‘ If you aren’t the cloaked figure that locked us up, who is?’’. The man seemed puzzled. ‘‘ I’m not sure... well, I guess I’ll forgive you, but be careful who you shoot at next time. He stood up, and vanished.

‘‘ Whoa. I did not expect that.’’, said Midna, very surprized. Link nodded. Midna had no idea any more what to do now, but she couldn’t sleep with her breasts becoming bigger and bigger with every moment she delayed. ‘‘ Since the Palace of Twilight, my breasts have become more then 50 percent bigger. And my buttocks and hips... they’re bigger too. Not as significantly as my breasts.’’, Midna thought mournfully. ‘‘ What now?’’, thought Link.''

Why is there no sex in this D:

Originally Posted by Crims0n

Why is there no sex in this D:

What a thing to say in your first post.

I cannot tolerate any but the mildest content- I despise actual pornography, and the mildest BE content is what I submit. Plain BE, nothing else.

[Grim]

Originally Posted by Crims0n

Why is there no sex in this D:

consider sex optional when ur lookin at process content, in this situation people are more interested in the boobies getting bigger than seeing a shadow imp gettin plugged

[dameat222]

the story is great

[Huzzus]

Ya, I agree that there should be no sex. I, Huzzus, can tolerate somethings but sex is a MAJOR no-no.

[crazyazn]

no sex in a sexual fetish.

0.o?

maybe the overly graphic kind where you realize how obscenely biological you are but...

Leave me and my preferences alone. Thank you, everyone, for your compliments, etc.

'' Link and Midna both slowly moved back towards the Ordon Village. Link looked around and thought he saw the magician again, examining another goat. He decided to ignore this for now, since he claimed he was trying to help Midna. Suddenly, he heard footsteps. He looked up. On the hill stood a dark cloaked figure. He looked back, and saw another dark figure sitting next to a goat. In a flash he grabbed his bow, and shot in the arm of the person on the hill. A loud, hardly human scream woke up the entire Ordona Province.

The figure vanished with a speed Link hadn’t seen before in his life. Doors opened, and Midna quickly jumped in Link’s shadow. Link went back to the ranch. He couldn’t see the ranch owner anywhere, but he saw the cloaked figure again. Midna appeared from his shadow again. She noticed something. It took a few seconds and then she realized her breasts had completely stopped growing. But she decided not to believe it was over yet- and that was a wise decision.

Link walked towards the magician again. ‘‘ Oh, hello. I have done some more studying, and I notice that the magic working on Midna has weakened... temporarily.’’, he said. Midna said nothing, but she nodded. ‘‘ I even discovered why. The dark cloaked figure which you have seen... he is an evil creature created when Zant cast the dark spell on you. By shooting him, he has weakened, and so has his magic. If you kill him, the spell will stop completely. His arm will recover in one, maybe two days.

‘‘ Well, thanks for your advice.’’, said Midna with a smile. Her hope had been renewed once again. Link was going to find this enemy and destroy it, just like he had done with numerous dangerous enemies. ‘‘ Do you know where we can find him?’’, Midna said. ‘‘ Hm... I think he wants to be near you. That’s when his magic is the most powerful. In fact, if he touches you, his magic may become ten times as powerful. You better not let that happen!’’, he said. ‘‘ Maybe you should lure him- make him think you are not alert and then get him.’’

Midna thanked the magician once more, and she said: ‘‘ Well, Link- let’s go and wait near your house.’’ Link nodded, and together they went back to Link’s house. And there, they waited. It gave Midna some more time to think. Her breasts were now almost twice as big as they had been in the palace of Twilight. The weight made it harder to float, but she still could. Link gave her some bread. She didn’t want to drink any Ordon Goat Milk, though Link offered it to her. She decided not to take a risk. And so the day slowly passed.

The next morning, when the sun came up, Midna suddenly noticed something that alarmed her. She shook Link, and woke him up. ‘‘ Link, the dark creature... I’m sure it has healed, and that it is near. Please be on guard... I can feel it.’’, she said. She felt the same she had been feeling so long. Tingly feeling in her breasts, higher bloodpressure. She kept looking around, waiting for a scary dark cloaked figure to show up. Link clutched his bow and kept looking around, when suddenly he heard a scream, which he had heard yesterday as well.

Suddenly, from a tree, a cloaked figure with knife-like fingers jumped down, obviously aiming for Midna. In a hurry, Link shot once and missed. In the following second, a lot happened. Link knew he could not afford to miss once more, and that he had to hit the head in the cloak. He already had an arrow on the string, took a fraction of a second to aim and shot, while Midna shrieked. Hardly an inch above Midna, the cloaked figure stopped in mid-air, and fell to pieces, which blew away on the wind. Link and Midna sighed. Was it over?''

Now you get to pick from five ends/next parts. The idea is that you pick a combination, if this seems possible:

'' It's Been Fun...'': Midna changes back to her normal form and her breasts turn back to their normal size. Everything goes as the story tells in the game.

'' You Can't Have Everything...'': Midna changes back to her normal form, and her breasts stop growing, but they will remain big for ever.

'' The End? Nope! '': It's not over yet- the dark spell cannot be so easily stopped. The spellbook itself also has to be destroyed.

'' Alternative Middle Part '': We go back to the part where Link defeated Ganondorf. Midna did return to her original shape, but the breasts are still a problem. How can they fix it? This can be combined with any other end.

'' Another One Gets Cursed '': Zelda, Ilia, or another female character gets cursed as well, and will have to break the curse. This can be combined with any other end.


Please, reply .

[sabel4]

Alternative Middle, Zelda also gets cursed.