mind control, bimbo transformation - Page 52

Vengeance1701 · 08-06-2010

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Originally Posted by blackshirtboy

Colourful language there XP
And I dunno, I feel like The Hornies was a perfect length. Also my love of it comes down mostly to my World Builders Disease. When I come across an engaging, well-thought out world then I fall in love with it, and usually the story after that.

LOL, man, I've been saying Hornies is SHORT compared to his normal works!

So your perfect length for him is a shorter tale...I don't know if I've been successful in capturing that intent.

KiTA · 08-06-2010

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Originally Posted by ederin

One funny thing is that writing this way kills my own fantasy. I can never go there again. My delightful bimbo bubble gum summer camp - gone. My sexy little goth girl wearing pink -- gone. Sad.

Oh, I'm sure it's not gone. I used to have that problem, but then I tried writing a sequel to my own works, and it, well, worked.

Try writing a sequel to your bubble gum summer camp story, and see where it takes you. I think you'll be surprised.

Red_Mage · 08-06-2010

Yes, Wandrer was the one. I mispelled it.

And Ederin, I have to congratulate you on the summer camp story. It was excellent, and I loved the twist at the end. You do put more work into your characters than a lot of writers who do that type of fiction, which I appreciate. I couldn't agree with your take on it more.

Fett15 · 08-11-2010

Just wondering if anyone knows where this image came from? I think I got it from here but I can't remember the story it went with.

T.L. · 08-11-2010

It's a pic form a story for the BEstory club. I can't remember the name, but I know what it about.

robopike · 08-12-2010

The story's called "Body Of Evidence" or something close to that

Vengeance1701 · 08-12-2010

Be on the lookout, Avaro's got his next bimboization masterpiece started...

T.L. · 08-13-2010

Pardon me for asking, but who is that?

olddude12 · 08-13-2010

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Originally Posted by Fett15

Just wondering if anyone knows where this image came from? I think I got it from here but I can't remember the story it went with.

Look through the thread, the full story is somewhere in here.

catfish27 · 08-13-2010

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Originally Posted by T.L.

Pardon me for asking, but who is that?

Who is...Avaro, you mean?

http://avaro56.deviantart.com/

Vengeance1701 · 08-13-2010

Yeah, the guy who's already posted in this thread....?

SkyFox · 08-14-2010

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Originally Posted by T.L.

Pardon me for asking, but who is that?

Avaro's gallery: http://avaro56.deviantart.com/gallery/

08-06-2010	#615
Red_Mage Process Disciple Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,980	Re: mind control, bimbo transformation Yes, Wandrer was the one. I mispelled it. And Ederin, I have to congratulate you on the summer camp story. It was excellent, and I loved the twist at the end. You do put more work into your characters than a lot of writers who do that type of fiction, which I appreciate. I couldn't agree with your take on it more.

08-11-2010	#617
T.L. Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 125	Re: mind control, bimbo transformation It's a pic form a story for the BEstory club. I can't remember the name, but I know what it about.

08-12-2010	#618
robopike Leecher Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 2	Re: mind control, bimbo transformation The story's called "Body Of Evidence" or something close to that

08-12-2010	#619
Vengeance1701 Modest Moderator Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,998	Re: mind control, bimbo transformation Be on the lookout, Avaro's got his next bimboization masterpiece started... __________________ Meh. Cranky and old.

08-13-2010	#620
T.L. Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 125	Re: mind control, bimbo transformation Pardon me for asking, but who is that?

08-13-2010	#623
Vengeance1701 Modest Moderator Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,998	Re: mind control, bimbo transformation Yeah, the guy who's already posted in this thread....? __________________ Meh. Cranky and old.