TMC's Scripts To Clips Contest!

[MeToo]

Sorry for the late post, I hope I made it under the wire.

Script is called: Sammie Gets Detention.

MeToo

[sleeper248]

Yes! I got my last script posted just as the clock hit midnight.

11. Party Prep

It is not as polished as my other entries. I didn't have enough time to insert all the camera movements or scene headings.

http://www.process-productions.com/f...0&postcount=16

Rei-Lin,

I would like to post .pdf versions of my scripts to include formating and make them easier to read but will not change anything material to the original entries.

With the integrity of the contest in mind, shall I post these .pdf versions in a new post or can I add them to my original post without fear of disqualification?

To everyone in the community: Please let me know what you like best about my entries, which option you like best for the entries with multiple options, and any other respectfully constructive criticism you would like to share.

[Rei-Lin]

Hah! Talk about last minute you guys! HEHE! I'd just attach your .pdf file to your original post sleeper248, should make it easier to just go post by post and grab all the scripts at once. As you all may now know, the contest is now over! Thank you all who entered and posted scripts and also thanks to those who left a few comments. I'd like to leave the comments part open to all who view the scripts, your opinions are going to be valuable through the entire process of picking the winners, and even afterwards, as the clips are brought to life, so keep talking and discussing them!

As for a timeline on how long TMC will need to finalize the scripts and look over the comments and whatnot to pick the winners, I have no firm date at this time. I'd like to have it nailed down, but since the holidays are still lingering about, it may be a few days or longer before we hear anything on here, or I hear anything from TMC due to travel, family gatherings, etc. So I do ask that everybody stay patient and give TMC some time to work on these things, as we got quite a few scripts to read over now. Good luck to you all.

[Blackbat]

Originally Posted by qzar9999

I would like to cast 1.2 trillion votes for Nom Anor's Drink to Shrink script. I would unquestionably buy that clip.

justified voting there, i would also like to cast the same but 1,200,000,000,001 votes

Originally Posted by Nom Anor

What, you thought I wouldn't come again? Leaving you hanging without bringing you the fun again?

Okay, so I've got three attachments for the final push.

The first is a third and final edit of "Drink to Shrink". Fixed a few more errors with direction, tweaked a couple pieces of dialogue, and fixed a minor, but still noticeable continuity error (I realized Andrea doesn't notice the "Drink Me" tag in either V1 or V2; also helps set up a joke at the end). Again, sorry for all these errors.

Attachments two and three are quickies I wanted to throw into the pot just to spice things up. Despite my pleasure with "Drink to Shrink", the wheels in my head kept turning and I had a, heh, little time to churn out two quick breakdowns. There wasn't time for a full script, but I hope the breakdowns are detailed enough. "Corporate Resizing" is a size/attribute transfer while "Little Mermaid" is more SW.

still an instant buy for me, even the new ones, especially "Corporate Resizing"

[BudapestSwopeJr]

Taylor and I thank everyone who submitted a script!

Thanks also for any comments about the scripts posted in this thread. Please continue to post about them if you want. Feedback is always helpful to us.

We will choose at least three to produce but we might choose more and the the same deal will be honored for those.

[anonymous]

I hope mine gets picked. I am really the only one who posted something different then most people.

[Nom Anor]

Argh, don't do that! You made me think the winners had been posted.

[sleeper248]

I attached easier to read PDF versions to my post.

Please review my scripts and let me know what you think. Be sure to mention which option you are writing about when reviewing my scripts that contain multiple options.

I removed the neBEulized that featured a ninja so I only have ten entries for this contest.

http://www.process-productions.com/f...0&postcount=16

Since I might have a tendency to be a little biased in reviews of my own scripts, I'll simply list them in a top-ten style in order of building excitment with #1 as the clip I would be most excited to see.

10. Seven Minutes In Heaven - Epic Fail
09. Plant Life
08. neBEulized
07. Bursting With Magic
06. Bath-Time Beasties
05. PARTY PREP
04. Succubus BE
03. DEEP BREATHS
02. Pressure Luck - Options B or C
01. Bubble Gum Vengeance

Following is my review of the other contestant's entries.

I've been told that I sometimes lack tact when communicating with others. If my words offend you, please note that it was not my intent to offend any of my fellow respected authors.

Title - Author - Review

Sweet revenge - Kong - This clip would appeal to the giantess/amazon community. If you are part of that community, definitely give this one a read. I like the BE part. Depending on how the fangs are done could make or break this clip. I'm just not into the giantess/amazon thing.

Werewolf Futa Transformation - Exiram Movies - Sorry, I'm just not into Futa or extremely hairy girls. Not enough detail for me to properly review.

Alyssa's Secret - mperone - One of the better warewolf TF scenes I've read. I like that the transformation is expected and the wolf has a purpose. Good detail in your writing. But, as I said before, I'm not into extremely hairy girls.

Party Preparations - Heliumpongo - I like this one. One point of confusion in the details. Did the inflation start out at just the breasts and then go to full body inflation or did it remain just the breasts throughout?

Quiet Time - BaronChimera - Creative. This would work as an episode of Twilight Zone or Tales from the Darkside. Sorry BaronChimera, it just doesn't have enough (any) of the processes that would interest me to buy it as a clip here.

Script! aka I Think We Found Happiness - Ballsdeep - I like this one. I only had two problems with the script. First, the mom mentions both animals and a brother. We neither see nor hear anything indicating their presence. Second, you had me until the girls took their clothes off. As a clip, I might buy this is one if it ended prior to the nudity.

kymanthropy - danielsangeo - From what I read it seems a Kymanthrope is similar to a lycanthrope, replacing the wolf with a balloon. The popping balloon "bites" the victim's cheek, turning the victim into an inflated kymanthrope at the next full moon, and alters their personality/voice. Where did you get the name Kymanthropy? I like how you covered different inflation aspects (BE, Belly, Butt) before finishing with full body.

BytorScript Idea2 Wonka's Revenge - Tekair - A good idea for a blueberry clip. I like that another character was present to tease the inflatee. As far as purchasing this as a clip, I would wait a while due to the other recent blueberry clips in the TMC store.

Sarah's Power - mperone - Well detailed. Good job. However, this clip wouldn't appeal to me. With all due respect, superhero TF and graphic masterbation scenes are just not among my preferences.

A berry bad batch - bubba7545 - This one is different enough to graby my attention. I like the popping at the end and the variation on the traditional blueberry inflation. The phone conversations were a nice touch.

The Three Wise Women - spzero - I like how you fit the three different expansions in one clip and tied it all together with the statues. I would consider getting this clip but it would not be my first pick from this contest.

WorldsBiggestBitch - spzero - Again, well done in fitting multiple inflations together in the story. I'm on the fence about this one as I am a fan of BE but don't care for the tall growth.

TMC Clip Script aka Blueberry Boobs - Slothed - Sorry, but for me, part of the blueberry thing is the imobilization because of how heavy they get with all that juice. Her walking around and out the door at the end kind of turns me off to this clip.

He had it coming aka Karma is a bitch - anonymous - Gender bending is not among my interests so I'll have to pass on this one.

Alien Futanari Impregnation - _R_ - Good detail and a bit graphic. I just don't like futa.

Perfume Transformation Script - DCMV - Seems like standard fare for a bimbo TF clip. I'm not a fan of the heavy makeup typically used in bimbo TF clips that usually makes the bimbo look kind of clownish rather than sexy.

Sleeping Pills Futanari - poppert56 - A well writen storyline. I like how you keep the audience guessing at the end. I am just not into futanari.

Breast Friends - Weirdoid - Male on male scenes hold no interest for me.

Forever Love - Weirdoid - A cautionary tale about making wishes. I like the detail you put into your script. However, I don't care for genderbending.

Special Jello - Laughingman - At least she didn't get "blueberry" gellatin. Not too graphic and she remained clothed. I really like this one, Laughingman, good job. Reminds me of my neBEulized script where she can't get to the phone.

Corporate Resizing_v1 - Nom Anor - I usually like more extreme inflations, but this is a nice story. May I suggest: she randomly hides in the managerial closet without realizing it and then after the change she remembers aloud about Natalie's outfit in the managerial closet and then looking around, "wait, this is the managerial closet" and gets the clothes.

Drink to Shrink_v3 - Nom Anor - The dialogue is good and the storyline solid. A good script overall. While I don't have anything against shrinking clips, they just don't interest me.

Little Mermaid_v1 - Nom Anor - While I am not into shrinking clips, this is an amusing little story. With a little further development this could eaisly pass as an episode of Twilight Zone. Welcome to the annual mermaid fishfry.

Pills - mysteryman29 - If you like animal TF, definitly check out this script and write a review. While a good script, it is not something I would personally be interested in seeing.

Juiced - Blackjack - Except for the second person being present, I really didn't read anything that would make this clip different enough from other blueberry inflation clips to interest me.

A Growing Career in Nursing - FeironLucs - If you like nurses growing through the ceiling and riping out of their clothes, give this one a review. It is a good clip for fans of this particular fetish category.
I do not happen to be one of those fans.

The Ultimate Vibrator - GenYun - As I've said before, I am really not into futa.

Exes and Ohs - Clovis - I like your preference for the actress to be clothed like maybe a t-shirt and shorts. Definitely one I would consider purchasing.

No Easy Way Out - Clovis - A nice alternate use for the blueberry suit. Would they have to paint the suit flesh colors or do you have an explaination in the storyline for the blue color of the suit?

What He's Missing_ - Clovis - This one is pretty good but I think your "Exes and Ohs" should be considered before this one.

Sammie Grows Out Of Detention - MeToo - I believe this is the only raging hulk growth clip in the contest. The idea is good with the principal doing random drug screenings and the friend texting her to get rid of her stash before going to see him/her. I'm not into the hulking growth clips but this is a good script for those who are into it.

I believe that is all the entries. Let me know if I missed yours.

[sleeper248]

Hi Rei-Lin. Any word on a date when TMC will announce the winners?

Originally Posted by Rei-Lin

The way the winning scripts are chosen is two fold:

1) TMC will obviously be looking at the scripts that are posted and getting some ideas of which ones they want to make.

2) ALL OF YOU! Yes, it's true, the community here on this forum needs to voice their opinions on the scripts that are posted and tell TMC which scripts they should be turning into clips. The more people that talk about a certain script will help peak the interest of TMC to pick that script over others. This doesn't mean you post a quick "I like it. Make that one" blurb, but give us an idea of WHY you think a particular script stands out! The more feedback, the better. Remember that TMC wants to produce the clips that make the community happy and gets them making even more clips.

I would like to suggest that, since it was part of the original post, submitting a script or scripts by midnight the morning of Jaunary 2nd, 2013, should be considered only the first part of entering this contest.

I think it may be too much to ask every author to do like I did and write a review for every script submitted.
Therefore, I propose that anyone who submitted a script must post reviews of at least their top five scripts from other submissions in order for their script(s) to be considered officially entered into this contest.

In the same post before the reviews, I would suggest allowing the author to list their own favorite script that they would like others to vote for most.


What do you think, Rei-Lin?

[Rei-Lin]

Herro!
Well I didn't really make posting a review of the scripts a requirement for winning the contest, but I thought of it as more of a way to "twist the arm" of TMC so to say. So if there were lets say, 20 people giving a good nod to a werewolf transformation script, then I think TMC would head in that direction when they went to choose the scripts. Of course picking a script like that is still the final say of TMC and even if they liked it enough to make a clip from it, it could be months before they felt confident enough to attempt it.

I wouldn't mind seeing more people give their thoughts on scripts, but it doesn't have to be a top 5 or top 10 list. Just posting about even one script that they like and why they like it is a help. Again, remember that TMC wants to make the clips people in the community would like to see. From looking over some of the scripts, I think a lot of people wrote quite conservatively either out of fear of being too hard to produce or perhaps because their idea was a bit outside the normal realms of the fetishes most people around here enjoy (like nose expansion or foot growth etc).

In any case, I do hope we can do another contest sometime down the road and by then, TMC will probably have produced enough work that people will feel much better about posting scripts, regardless of difficulty. Least that's my hope.

As for hearing something, I've yet to hear anything about the winners, but I'd assume it'll be several weeks, probably not until closer to the end of the month before they can chew through that many scripts. I think there were 43 scripts, some of which were pretty in depth, and with their normal shooting schedule, I'm sure TMC is up to their eyeballs in work of all kinds! If I hear something before they post an update, you'll all be the first to know!

[Weirdoid]

Originally Posted by Rei-Lin

Herro!


I wouldn't mind seeing more people give their thoughts on scripts, but it doesn't have to be a top 5 or top 10 list. Just posting about even one script that they like and why they like it is a help. Again, remember that TMC wants to make the clips people in the community would like to see. From looking over some of the scripts, I think a lot of people wrote quite conservatively either out of fear of being too hard to produce or perhaps because their idea was a bit outside the normal realms of the fetishes most people around here enjoy (like nose expansion or foot growth etc).

I have been trying to goad myself to read the stories so I can write a review but so far have not been able to.

I was a bit conservative on the sex scenes myself because I do not know how adult you get (Taylor made goes more fetish than all out porn).

As for my TF tastes, I already know that almost no one else really liked gay and male in their TG but me. I was recently mocked on metamorphose on it and got alot of insults from the process TG forum on it over the years.

[Laughingman]

My computer charger died around the time I submitted my script so I haven't been able to keep up. Looking forward to the winners, and it'd be cool if they still maybe used the ideas for clips later!