Midna BE Story

[cyero]

Top or right, definitely.

[AhziDahaka]

I kinda like the bottom one, actually... Closely followed by the one on the right.

Hot damn though, Grim, they're all awesome.

[geno13]

I can't decide, either. They all look great.

[Artnonymous]

The one on the right is my favorite.

[kingnitros]

can't decide!!

Originally Posted by Grim

not really sure wich one to finish, im leaning towards the one on the right tho, wut do u think?

They're all really really awesome. It's so great you drew that, really awesome! If I'd have to pick, I'm having a hard time to decide, but... make it the one on the right, or the upper one.

To go further on the story, I'm still not sure whether or not to turn her to normal at the end. I do not want to disappoint so, please, tell me.

[Kelberon]

If I might make a suggestion?

Without participating in the vote, I have been keeping track of this thread and your work. And if you're thinking of doing a new story, you could split the difference. Return Midna to normal-or mostly normal-but leave some hint that what she's gone through has made her susceptible to relapses, or to further manipulation in general. That could be a launching pad for a new story about her, either still in her imp form or in her adult form, and allow you to involve new characters as well.

Just a thought.

Originally Posted by Kelberon

If I might make a suggestion?

Without participating in the vote, I have been keeping track of this thread and your work. And if you're thinking of doing a new story, you could split the difference. Return Midna to normal-or mostly normal-but leave some hint that what she's gone through has made her susceptible to relapses, or to further manipulation in general. That could be a launching pad for a new story about her, either still in her imp form or in her adult form, and allow you to involve new characters as well.

Just a thought.

But I think people prefer I END this story and create a new one. And I better get started on that, too. I've been far too lazy. But perhaps I will make use of your suggestion a small bit. I cannot promise that now, though.

[zenaku]

I haven't read this whole thread, and I tend to avoid stories on here. But allow me to give you a piece of advice. Write the story as you want to. Its okay to take advice from those around you. But YOU are the author. If you let others dictate how the story goes, its not yours at all.

Okay, I decided to do it exactly the way I wanted, and here it is. And perhaps I'll continue. Give me your critique, please.

'' A cloud moved away from the sun, and light filled the area. It seemed to increase in strength. Link had looked at the sky, his eyes half closed. He looked at Midna and saw that a great amount of the light seemed to come from her. He could hardly see her- all he saw was a white shape that seemed to change. He turned his head from the blinding light, a bit worried about Midna. After a few seconds the light faded. Link turned his head again, and gasped.

What stood in front of him, was a beautiful woman with long red hair. In his surprise, he concluded that all was well at last. Midna was completely back to normal. The situation became a bit awkward as Link just kept staring. Midna smiled and broke the silence. ‘‘What? Say something! Am I so beautiful you’ve no words left?’’, she said. Link’s surprised face turned into a smile. ‘‘ I am back to normal at last. Thank you so much, Link.’’, she said.

Link and Midna were both very happy now, but the inevitable goodbye that was to come lay in the nearby future like a shadow. While walking through the Faron Woods, Link looked around at the beautiful trees. Midna noticed Link was distracted so she took a moment to feel how big her breasts were. Midna noticed they were bigger than they had been before she was cursed. But, at least they did not grow any more. Her buttocks were slightly bigger than before she was cursed, but the difference was hardly noticable.

She cheerfully concluded there was no harm done. Link and Midna travelled together, as in a dream, towards the Mirror of Twilight. Darkness had fallen, when at last they reached it. Midna had to return to her people. The Mirror of Twilight opened the portal to the Twilight Realm, and Midna spoke to Link once more. She thanked him, and tried to say more, but she couldn’t find any more words. ‘‘ Link... I.... see you later.’’, she said.

She threw one of her tears towards the Mirror of Twilight, and it magically floated through the air. She said her final goodbye, and as her tear hit the Mirror of Twilight and started cracking. She entered the Twilight Realm, and the Mirror of Twilight then was shattered to pieces. Link stood there, astonished, and sad.

EPILOGUE.

‘‘ Some say... some say that when something significant, something that really made a difference happens, time and space shatter. Sometimes in two pieces, sometimes in many hundreds, they say. It makes one wonder... it makes one wonder where anything like that has taken place, and in how many shards of time and space you live, and if you would like that shard or shards better than the one you live in. The past story may have gone differently at a point- in a different shard of time and space. You may hear of one of those shards once...’’ ''

I hope this hasn't destroyed your interest for the story... it hasn't, has it?

I'll wait for some more comments before I begin with the alternative timeline story.

[Ninja In The Night]

As nice as it was to see you finish up with the story, looking back at the votes, it didn't seem like what anyone really wanted. You took your own route, and as great as the story began, people wanted to see it continued. None-the-less, it was a Grade A story, and I hope your next one goes well...