The Haruhi Armband (Complete)

Apsm · 01-07-2009

Hey there!

The "Refresh" sequel is currently postponed, so I can't gaurantee any release. I'm a little stuck on what outfit a TG'd Asuka may give a TG'd Shinji to wear. So any suggestions, and descriptions of a outfit might be nice.

And now to what this is really about. I thought it was about time someone was transformed into Haruhi Suzumiya.

Anyway, here's a quick synopsis: A young man, who isn't enthusiastic about cosplay finds a cosplay item which turns him into his favourite character.

Does also contain some slight woman to man TG, but not as detailed as the first TG sequence.

Please read and deliver feedback

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UPDATE: I just put it on to Deviantart (I think I did, if it's not there, then I screwed up).
http://apsm.deviantart.com/

Axel-D · 01-08-2009

I enjoyed it, being the fan of the Haruhi series I am. The mental changes were well done and overall it was described nicely!

Dr. Eggman · 01-10-2009

With all due respect, wouldn't it've just been easier to've written a Haruhi/Kyon fanfic?

The_Weirdo · 01-11-2009

Anime change, good!
Well-described TF, good!

I likey!

Vipermagix · 01-15-2009

can I ask? cuz there's this one bit i'm confused about. the part where she strips naked to look at herself, down to her ribbons and socks and shoes. there's a bit more transformation, and then her undershirt turns into a bra and stuff. isn't she naked? why is the undershirt-bra still on her? and if it's off her, how would she know about it changing? is she looking at it, rather than looking at herself? just a bit of perspective-ambiguity there.

overall technically adept and well-written, if not fantastically innovative. more!

Apsm · 01-15-2009

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Originally Posted by Vipermagix

can I ask? cuz there's this one bit i'm confused about. the part where she strips naked to look at herself, down to her ribbons and socks and shoes. there's a bit more transformation, and then her undershirt turns into a bra and stuff. isn't she naked? why is the undershirt-bra still on her? and if it's off her, how would she know about it changing? is she looking at it, rather than looking at herself? just a bit of perspective-ambiguity there.

She is naked, but is looking at the shirt ON THE FLOOR turning into a bra.

lisalover1 · 03-20-2009

Are there other stories or pictures like this? I know that there is a lot of TGed HS characters art out there, but I'm referring to actual transformation. Is there anything like that?

kanoyume · 03-20-2009

There's this: http://koohart.deviantart.com/art/CM...u-TF-115014571
Is this the kinda thing you meant?

kooh · 03-20-2009

I get mentioned

lisalover1 · 03-25-2009

Yeah, but I already saw that before I posted this. Thanks, though.

narpas-sword · 03-26-2009

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Originally Posted by lisalover1

Are there other stories or pictures like this? I know that there is a lot of TGed HS characters art out there, but I'm referring to actual transformation. Is there anything like that?

there isn't alot. If I've noticed anything about the tf community it's that nobody messes with Haruhi.
it might have something to do with the fact that those who do mysteriously dissapear.

01-08-2009	#2
Axel-D chaldeachange Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: United States Posts: 1,598	Re: Story: The Haruhi armband. I enjoyed it, being the fan of the Haruhi series I am. The mental changes were well done and overall it was described nicely!

01-10-2009	#3
Dr. Eggman World's Greatest Genius Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 14	Re: Story: The Haruhi armband. With all due respect, wouldn't it've just been easier to've written a Haruhi/Kyon fanfic?

01-11-2009	#4
The_Weirdo Process Fan Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 53	Re: Story: The Haruhi armband. Anime change, good! Well-described TF, good! I likey!

01-15-2009	#5
Vipermagix Leecher Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 1	Re: Story: The Haruhi armband. can I ask? cuz there's this one bit i'm confused about. the part where she strips naked to look at herself, down to her ribbons and socks and shoes. there's a bit more transformation, and then her undershirt turns into a bra and stuff. isn't she naked? why is the undershirt-bra still on her? and if it's off her, how would she know about it changing? is she looking at it, rather than looking at herself? just a bit of perspective-ambiguity there. overall technically adept and well-written, if not fantastically innovative. more!

03-20-2009	#7
lisalover1 Has a thing for Kim Pine Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Kalamazoo, Michigan Posts: 29	Re: Story: The Haruhi armband. Are there other stories or pictures like this? I know that there is a lot of TGed HS characters art out there, but I'm referring to actual transformation. Is there anything like that?

03-20-2009	#8
kanoyume Lurker Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 13	Re: Story: The Haruhi armband. There's this: http://koohart.deviantart.com/art/CM...u-TF-115014571 Is this the kinda thing you meant?

03-20-2009	#9
kooh Process Disciple Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: . Posts: 3,566	Re: Story: The Haruhi armband. I get mentioned __________________ .

03-25-2009	#10
lisalover1 Has a thing for Kim Pine Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Kalamazoo, Michigan Posts: 29	Re: Story: The Haruhi armband. Yeah, but I already saw that before I posted this. Thanks, though.