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The Bored Website - Fantasies (Complete)
Ripped off an idea from Flango, and this is as far as I have gotten so far. What do you think?
The full story can be found about 6 posts down. Just trying to reduce the clutter.
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05-01-2009 | #2 |
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Re: A piece of a story.
Wow, why is there not more of this?!?!
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05-01-2009 | #3 |
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Re: A piece of a story.
Mostly cause you make all of one person who has shown the slightest interest. Thank you for that, though.
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05-01-2009 | #4 |
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Re: A piece of a story.
I would have expressed interest if I had seen it before now. I like it.
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05-01-2009 | #5 |
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Re: A piece of a story.
Seconded.
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05-01-2009 | #6 |
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Re: A piece of a story.
I hadn't seen it before this. Very nice work. Gotta wonder what she has in mind - for that matter, what's in his. After all, the person doing this is his fantasy, which means somewhere deep down...
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05-01-2009 | #7 |
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Re: A piece of a story.
Well, it seems I was rather fond of this story too, since I went ahead and finished it a few days after posting this snippet.
The version I made was much easier on the eyes, but I went ahead and converted it to .txt format for ease of use. So here you go. Enjoy! P.S. It turns out I was working on a sequel to this, as well. It was never finished, but I might do so more work on it this weekend. @Xodiac: That is exactly right.
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05-02-2009 | #8 |
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Re: A piece of a story.
Yes, it is a very good story. I like it very much Just hope you choose to do a sequel to it and use up the other items, especially the remote. That could be fun, if it is the same as the remote I used in one of my stories
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05-02-2009 | #9 |
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Re: A piece of a story.
Had some flow issues and there were a few spelling errors that careful editing would fix...but all in all it was a interesting well written story. I look forward to seeing your next one .
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