Watch Your Tongue! - Shrink Fan Comics

[Valeyard Vince]

Happy New Years - Watch Your Tongue is out now!



Shrink Fan rings in the new year with the story of Mandy, a woman whose big mouth gets her into even bigger trouble!



Synopsis: A woman named Mandy, who is far from a good natured person, is cursed to shrink whenever she is mean or performs a bad deed. Can she find a cure before her acts cause her to shrink to nothingness?

Release date: January 1st, 2017
Written by: a0040pc
Lineart by: Michela da Sacco
Colors by: Ylenia Di Napoli
Tags: Shrinking woman, hand held, growth, giantess, shrinking out of clothes

Issue Link: Watch Your Tongue!

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[Prof_Sai]

::A big yellow dog walks up and starts licking Vince. ::

[Captain Ash]

I liked the story.
It begins like one of these spooky comics.
Although being mean, Mandy is still invited to parties. On her way she nearly drives over an old gypsy who puts a curse on her.

The details how Mandy’s clothes and shoes are getting more and more baggy are awesome.
I also liked her attempt to hide to the other party guests how small she got.
But one of my most favourite shrinking scenarios are: Shrinking into the car.

What I missed most was the conflict between the friends.
I’d like to see Tammy’s attitude like this: Now matter how mean I’m to you, you had to be nice to me.
Or Tammy trying to tell Mandy that being a submissive maid is the same like being nice.
Well, compared to the spooky beginning, the ending was a bit too nice for me.
But nonetheless it was a good read.

Captain Ash

[J Yubari]

Originally Posted by Captain Ash

I liked the story.
It begins like one of these spooky comics.
Although being mean, Mandy is still invited to parties. On her way she nearly drives over an old gypsy who puts a curse on her.

The details how Mandy’s clothes and shoes are getting more and more baggy are awesome.
I also liked her attempt to hide to the other party guests how small she got.
But one of my most favourite shrinking scenarios are: Shrinking into the car.

What I missed most was the conflict between the friends.
I’d like to see Tammy’s attitude like this: Now matter how mean I’m to you, you had to be nice to me.
Or Tammy trying to tell Mandy that being a submissive maid is the same like being nice.
Well, compared to the spooky beginning, the ending was a bit too nice for me.
But nonetheless it was a good read.

Captain Ash

I appreciate your feedback.

[Raso719]

I really liked the art in this one. Without getting into spoilers territory I must confess the ending sort of let me down.

I feel like it would've been fun seeing her make that journey over a few additional volumes and watching both her victories and the moments of weakness which set her back. It would be fun watching her struggle with that journey at her size and hlw she deals with the temptation of power later on. I guess though we have a picture of the wnd result that process could still potentially be revisited.

[scidram]

Based on the description and preview image of her shrinking in the car, I had been really looking forward to this particular comic.

The set up is reminiscent of Stephen King's (well, Richard Bachman's) Thinner, but I'm cool with that. Really like the scenes at the party and in the car. I would have liked one more shrink spurt before the final one, as it seems she goes from the 15"-18" range to 1"-2" really quickly.

I also echo the comment that it would've been nice to see more of her journey back if, for no other reason, to see her dealing with being small.

But hey, I'm just thrilled that this is happening and we're getting SW comics of really solid quality--in concept, writing, and art. Thanks so much!

[Anotherfetishguy]

I wish i had the money for a membership so bad