From darkness comes light, the story (AP, BE, TF, FtF)

wandering_spirit · 02-09-2010

Ten hours, spread over two days... That's how long it took me to write down the scenario to my first personal sequence, "From darkness comes light". I typed the last word of this at 1 PM eastern, just seconds before going for lunch.

To some, the ending might be a bit rushed, but I tapped myself dry. That's what happened when you pour all you got into what you do.

I hope you guys will like it.

Iscariot · 02-09-2010

Nice

Silver Spoon · 02-11-2010

I saw your sequence on dA before reading the story, but both are great.

I liked how you made the changes very slowly and detail, writing about them as an actual process instead of using numbers and writing.com-like phrases like "she got a DDD cup" to describe the changes going on. The hours you spent writing this story show.

I also like the actual concept itself - demon to angel. Don't see many of those on any site, much less The Process.

All in all, a good story.

02-09-2010	#2
Iscariot Process Fan Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 63	Re: From darkness comes light, the story (AP, BE, TF, FtF) Nice

02-11-2010	#3
Silver Spoon Mostly gone Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Philadelphia, PA Posts: 2,122	Re: From darkness comes light, the story (AP, BE, TF, FtF) I saw your sequence on dA before reading the story, but both are great. I liked how you made the changes very slowly and detail, writing about them as an actual process instead of using numbers and writing.com-like phrases like "she got a DDD cup" to describe the changes going on. The hours you spent writing this story show. I also like the actual concept itself - demon to angel. Don't see many of those on any site, much less The Process. All in all, a good story.