One Piece story idea...(TG kinda)

Lurker#12763412 · 01-30-2008

The new cheesy name for my story will be......

Orange Smoothie

I did a re-write of it and corrected some mistakes. Im going to post it as a txt attachment.

This just popped into my head one day.. and I finally decided to post it somewhere. If this kind of thing is frowned upon, I will delete it. If you want me to continue or any errors that need fixing, please tell me. This is the first story that I have ever "written"!!

The X.1 chapters will be the re-writes of the original 2 chapters, and then im planning on making another chapter.

Lurker#12763412 · 01-30-2008

deleted olf stuff and I guess

*reserved for future additions*

CupOfRamen · 01-30-2008

OMFG I LOVE THIS! There needs to be MC XD great work!

Lurker#12763412 · 02-01-2008

*put into text file in 1st post*

CupOfRamen · 02-01-2008

MC as in he starts thinking like a girl you know XD as if its no Luffy anymore but I love what you did so far!

Lurker#12763412 · 02-02-2008

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Originally Posted by CupOfRamen

MC as in he starts thinking like a girl you know XD as if its no Luffy anymore but I love what you did so far!

Ah, welll there is something like that coming soon... I think. Whatever pops out of my head, I jot down and do some slight fixing, and then I post it

I guess I could say I dont want to say anything becuase it will spoil it?

CupOfRamen · 02-02-2008

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Originally Posted by Lurker#12763412

Ah, welll there is something like that coming soon... I think. Whatever pops out of my head, I jot down and do some slight fixing, and then I post it

I guess I could say I dont want to say anything becuase it will spoil it?

oh well :] but I am looking forward to more!

Lurker#12763412 · 02-03-2008

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Kirokusclone · 03-04-2008

this is good....

Miracle overloading · 03-04-2008

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Originally Posted by Lurker#12763412

Random pic....
Attachment 28065

luffy's face on a girl is frightening.

PyroWildcat · 03-04-2008

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Originally Posted by Miracle overloading

luffy's face on a girl is frightening.

Good, so it's not just me.

03-04-2008

Interesting concept...although

1. I think there should be more physical discrepencies between Nami, Luffy, and the final product.
2. Brook hasn't shown up in here yet...does this story take place before Thriller Bark?

01-30-2008	#2
Lurker#12763412 Lurker Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 371	Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda) deleted olf stuff and I guess reserved for future additions Last edited by Lurker#12763412; 04-12-2009 at 08:39 PM.

01-30-2008	#3
CupOfRamen Depressed Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: home Posts: 101	Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda) OMFG I LOVE THIS! There needs to be MC XD great work!

02-01-2008	#4
Lurker#12763412 Lurker Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 371	Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda) put into text file in 1st post Last edited by Lurker#12763412; 04-12-2009 at 05:09 PM. Reason: space conserving?

02-01-2008	#5
CupOfRamen Depressed Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: home Posts: 101	Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda) MC as in he starts thinking like a girl you know XD as if its no Luffy anymore but I love what you did so far!

02-03-2008	#8
Lurker#12763412 Lurker Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 371	Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda) deleted pic Last edited by Lurker#12763412; 11-24-2008 at 03:12 AM.

03-04-2008	#9
Kirokusclone self proclaimed genious Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 257	Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda) this is good.... __________________ some comment, huh?

03-04-2008	#12
Cukeman Guest Posts: n/a	Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda) Interesting concept...although 1. I think there should be more physical discrepencies between Nami, Luffy, and the final product. 2. Brook hasn't shown up in here yet...does this story take place before Thriller Bark? Last edited by Cukeman; 03-04-2008 at 07:15 PM.