Five-panel TG/BE/AP/Bimbo

[wandering_spirit]

I was asked by Mistress_Gonzy on DeviantArt to draw a sequence, which turned into a trade.

My end of the deal was to draw a guy having to put on a (really) girly outfit which ends up changing him into a bimbo-like woman. The process was supposed to be only four panels, but I decided to add a fifth, and just go nuts with the changes.

Process-wise, it might not look very elaborate, but I was focusing mostly on the story part of it.

[SoylentOrange]

Not bad! Just need to work on your word balloons and this would be great.

[wandering_spirit]

Originally Posted by SoylentOrange

Not bad! Just need to work on your word balloons and this would be great.

Do you mean the shape or the words? My dad keeps telling me that my hand-writing is horrible...

[MadmanDarkHeretic]

Nice.

I would suggest half as much text. When doing comics, finding ways to say more with less and all lets the art more come through.

[genderhazard]

Offered as assistance-

If you have Microsoft word(although other programs might be better) then you can insert the image and insert the word and thought bubble shapes. you have set up your images to read left to right your lettering should follow suit.

A lettering Primer

[wandering_spirit]

Originally Posted by genderhazard

Offered as assistance-

If you have Microsoft word(although other programs might be better) then you can insert the image and insert the word and thought bubble shapes. you have set up your images to read left to right your lettering should follow suit.

A lettering Primer

Originally Posted by MadmanDarkHeretic

Nice.

I would suggest half as much text. When doing comics, finding ways to say more with less and all lets the art more come through.

Thanks a lot for the advice!