Changing Lingerie (Offsite)

somnium · 10-29-2010

I've posted some stories throughout the forum, but I figured that some TG fans might not have seen this yet.
http://praedatorius.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2yfcec
To describe it simply, a young man wanders a department store, waiting for the right moment to enter the lingerie department. However, he soon learns why he isn't allowed inside.

ashe5k · 10-30-2010

The transformation was handled really well in this one. I like this mythology that was set up here for it too. Very cool

Ranmakun · 10-30-2010

Would like to see more, thought it was really well written.

Sphore · 10-30-2010

Very nice!

blblblblbl · 11-01-2010

This is very good. I would definately like to see more.

Intox · 11-01-2010

Transformation's pretty good, though I find a lot of elements here baffling.

somnium · 11-01-2010

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Originally Posted by Intox

Transformation's pretty good, though I find a lot of elements here baffling.

Ooo! Baffling? Tell me more...

Intox · 11-02-2010

Forgive me if I missed some key elements here that retroactively invalidate my issues, as I'm in a college mood and as such very 'skimmy.'
One example, the boy at the beginning being led through this section/area/TF-field/whatever thinking nothing of what's happening to him, yet our prot later is fully aware and realizing the contrast between selves - didn't see any macguffin-hand-waving as to why this would or wouldn't occur.

Ranmakun · 11-02-2010

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Originally Posted by Intox

Forgive me if I missed some key elements here that retroactively invalidate my issues, as I'm in a college mood and as such very 'skimmy.'
One example, the boy at the beginning being led through this section/area/TF-field/whatever thinking nothing of what's happening to him, yet our prot later is fully aware and realizing the contrast between selves - didn't see any macguffin-hand-waving as to why this would or wouldn't occur.

I thought that was strange too, but then I considered that it was falling under the same principle that people don't notice it until they're made aware of it. Also points out that he at first didn't notice his transformation.

Ctu · 11-06-2010

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Originally Posted by Ranmakun

Would like to see more, thought it was really well written.

same here

riderkid · 11-06-2010

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Originally Posted by blblblblbl

This is very good. I would definately like to see more.

i third that motion

10-29-2010	#1
somnium Fetish Writer Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: New Jersey Posts: 321	Changing Lingerie (Offsite) I've posted some stories throughout the forum, but I figured that some TG fans might not have seen this yet. http://praedatorius.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2yfcec To describe it simply, a young man wanders a department store, waiting for the right moment to enter the lingerie department. However, he soon learns why he isn't allowed inside. __________________ She smiled. ...The fragrant breeze drifted up from the sea again. A magician wandered along the beach, but no one needed him. -Douglas Adams

10-30-2010	#2
ashe5k Transformer Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 488	Re: Story: Changing Lingerie The transformation was handled really well in this one. I like this mythology that was set up here for it too. Very cool __________________

10-30-2010	#3
Ranmakun Process Fan Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 39	Re: Story: Changing Lingerie Would like to see more, thought it was really well written.

10-30-2010	#4
Sphore Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 123	Re: Story: Changing Lingerie Very nice!

11-01-2010	#5
blblblblbl Process Fan Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 33	Re: Story: Changing Lingerie This is very good. I would definately like to see more.

11-01-2010	#6
Intox WHERE'S MY EDGY TITLE AT Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 143	Re: Story: Changing Lingerie Transformation's pretty good, though I find a lot of elements here baffling. __________________ I think Process is a pretty cool guy. eh transforms women and doesn't afraid of anything...

11-02-2010	#8
Intox WHERE'S MY EDGY TITLE AT Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 143	Re: Story: Changing Lingerie Forgive me if I missed some key elements here that retroactively invalidate my issues, as I'm in a college mood and as such very 'skimmy.' One example, the boy at the beginning being led through this section/area/TF-field/whatever thinking nothing of what's happening to him, yet our prot later is fully aware and realizing the contrast between selves - didn't see any macguffin-hand-waving as to why this would or wouldn't occur. __________________ I think Process is a pretty cool guy. eh transforms women and doesn't afraid of anything...