story snippet

[robertson]

I've got a TG story project I've had on the back burner for some time, and I wanted to post a transformation snippet from it and see what you guys thought of it. It hasn't been gone over too much, but I wanted to throw it out there in the hopes that if it's liked, it will be the impetus I need to finish the story.

-Robertson





Freddy lay in his bed with a look of deep concentration on his face, his bedside lamp casting a warm glow over the room, hiding its lackluster attempt at organization. Baskets of assorted clothes littered the room and every flat surface had become coated with the detritus of daily life. He relaxed as he felt the warm, tingly feeling creep over him, the tell-tale sign he would soon be changing. He cast a glance about the room, mentally chastising himself for letting it get cluttered. Before he could give thought to anything else his body suddenly lurched, shrinking by a good few inches, he looked down the bed and watched his feet move towards him again as he lost another couple inches. Under the blankets he could feel his hips push out a tad wider, he ran his thinning hands over them as he felt for other changes. His stomach gurgled as his entire waist abruptly pulled in, giving him quite the hourglass figure, and leaving the waistband of his boxers loose. He felt a bit like he was sinking into his bed watching the blankets cover a steadily smaller person. Feeling a tickle on his cheek, he reached up and pulled a lock of raven hair into view, quite foreign from his normally short, sandy hair. By this point it was about shoulder length, and it seemed to have stopped there. Content with his hair he spared a glance at his arms and hands, which were rapidly losing muscle mass and size. Fine hairs and smooth pale skin was replacing his normally furry and somewhat sunburnt skin. He ran a hand up his arm and shivered with the feeling it brought. An internally loud crunching sensation accompanied his shoulders becoming much narrower, accentuating how small he already felt, despite lingering in the range of 5’ 3”.
At this point he decided to get out of bed and see how he looked so far, leaving his now far too large boxers behind. Opening up his closet to get at the full length mirror on the back of the door, he noticed the familiar sensation of everything being taller and bigger than he was. Once he got a good look at himself, he saw he was currently very boyish in figure, though with hips slightly wider than an adolescent would have. His legs and feet had followed his arms and were thin and devoid of much muscle, his feet were perfectly petite, he guessed around a woman’s size 6. He wiggled his toes as he placed his miniscule foot next to his normal shoe, and marveled at the size difference. His face twitched a bit, and as he looked up at it in the mirror, it softened, rounding into a lovely shape, his eyes looked bigger than he remembered, and when he smiled at himself, his entire face lit up and he looked the picture of adorable. He was quite thrilled with how this one was turning out. As he backed up to get a better glimpse of the whole package, his nipples popped and nearly doubled in size. He watched his chest with excitement as his breasts expanded little by little, getting up to a size on the border of B and C cup. He briefly fondled himself, exploring the new doughy bits of flesh that would identify his gender for the length of time he wore this body. As he was about to touch his nipples, a sensation drew his attention to his crotch, where he watched his penis shrink in small spurts, until it was no bigger than a child’s, his testicles reducing in size and slurping up into his body behind his shrunken member. The head of his penis was soon the only thing showing, and it turned a dark shade of pink as it became his clitoris, enveloped by newly formed vaginal lips. He felt his internal organs shift around as his female reproductive system surged into being, which was a feeling he could never quite describe, but it almost always left him incredibly horny. As he (now she) regained her composure, she grabbed a robe out of her closet and put it on, tying the belt around her waist in a manner that left ample cleavage for her to peak at.

[Jake]

Great transformation