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The Incorrigible Author
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Richmond, Virginia
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Magic Rings
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Join Date: Jun 2005
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Re: Magic Rings
Interesting story.
I like the way you've described the fury and the human world. Also how Rose describes things from her point of view. It reminds me a bit of the point'n'click game Inherit the Earth. I've enjoyed reading this story, except for the last part. It went a little too fast and I'm not into diapers. I like also the drawings. The artist did a great job on the face expressions. Greetings Captain Ash
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Re: Magic Rings
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 I think there's going to be a long line of these since I know my boyfriend got one of me and Alyssa. But yeah, I agree this was a bit short. But this is more practice for the three/four shrunken women novels I was planning on writing. So any and all feed back is welcome on these exercises.
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