TwoSpiritTG's Fictionmania Stories

[RavenRift]

This is a thread dedicated to my writings on Fictionmania. I'll post here when I add a new chapter/a new story.

you can find them HERE.
http://www.fictionmania.tv/searchdis...html?word=5018

Disclaimer: I don't usually proofread my stories. As a result, simple mistakes to crop up. I tried before, but I usually get, um, well, distracted and such considering that they're my own sexual fantasies put in writing.

[RavenRift]

The first story, Wet Dream, is nearing a close. At the moment I have 22/32+Epilogue posted, but have up to Chapter 29 actually written. I'll be updating this one every week, submitting it on Thursday for it to be approved and uploaded by Friday.

Dean Collins is a regular guy that is mistaken by a witch as her molester. She curses him to transform into a woman whenever a guy gets too horny around him, and he has to fuck them. As the story progresses he starts to gain some amount of control, and uses the new bodies to try and figure a way to reverse the curse put on him, or get revenge.

XXX rated, hardcore sex in every chapter.

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The next story is a new one I just uploaded. Frustration
http://www.fictionmania.tv/stories/r...17043258638393

Jacob is in a frat while going to college for visual arts. He also has a secret, he always wanted to be a woman. He gains the ability to use the world as his canvas, but for some reason whenever he tries changing himself into his favorite female characters, someone else gets the benefit. Soon he will be the only guy in this fraternity, err, sorority?

This is also XXX rated, and has the humor tag. It's mostly a writing exercise for me, so I gave it a very loose plot for it to at least connect between the chapters. There is no central plot, and will never end.

All transformations in this one are into popular characters from the media. At the moment there is only one transformation, Jessica Rabbit, but there are more to come.

Again, though, this is mostly just process and sex with little to no plot in-between. With the exception of the prologue.

I should mention that the transformation scene and the sex scene are two different chapters, so if porn isn't your thing, but process is, you can just skip the sex stuff.

[iamseercoltz]

I love Wet Dream, it's a fun novella with a lot of great creativity, and great sex. I also enjoyed the first chapter of your new story, Frustration, but I only have one comment after the first chapter.

In Wet Dream, the characters the protagonist transforms into are yours, and are generally archetypes, and you've played the reactions and sex-scenes with these characters beautifully. However, in Frustration, you're using characters from popular media, and in the first story, after the description of the transformation, the sex scene might as well be between two made up characters, because there's nothing to further confirm that the roommate has actually become Jessica.

Basically, I feel that if you're going to use these characters, have some fun and have them act a bit like the characters too, giving the transformation a bit more versatility, and further confirming that they do indeed become copies of them. I'm not talking about identity death, just little quirks.

Keep in mind, this is just a tiny critique. I love your writing style, and look forward to every one of your stories. Please keep up the new one!

[RavenRift]

Wow, as someone who instantly fell in love with your work when you were introduced to TGComics and read through them all several times, that means a lot coming from you.

Originally the idea was for the person to just be in the body of said character, but I agree that they end up being a little flat without some of the quirks. They might as well just be a cosplayer instead of the character.

I did also originally plan on little scenes in the background with the characters interacting, paying homages to what they are from. Being set in Orlando, for example, any Disney princesses might get a job at Disney World.

I'm working on the next chapter now, actually, being multiple chapters ahead in Wet Dream, and should easily be able to work something like that in. Especially considering the character being turned into.

[iamseercoltz]

Thanks for the good words, but seriously, you're a very talented writer. I'm glad you feel the same way about rounding out the characters. With Jessica, I wasn't thinking the roommate would want to find a rabbit to bang. I'm more thinking of little things, like that she'd have the urge to put on a show and tease the protagonist, and maybe start talking in bad-girl puns without meaning too. By your response, I think you agree with this, too. It's such a fine line between a full-on, identity-death character transformation and having one's mind altered by the transformation, but you've towed that line really well in your previous stories (your Wet Dream protagonist is so interesting because he does give into becoming someone else but is still aware of his actual identity). Honestly, I was a little disappointed that everyone forgets about the transformations in Wet Dream after they're over, but I understand that it would be bad storytelling to deal with a 'he was a girl?!' situation every time he transforms.

Anyway, thanks for responding, and great job again. I'm looking forward to your next chapters with both stories!

[tghawk555]

Your stories always seem to include hardcore/graphic sex scenes. Is there a reasoning behind that? Not trying to judge, just trying to learn. (After all, if I were judging, the obvious thing to do would be for me to not read your stories, right~?)

[RavenRift]

Originally Posted by iamseercoltz

Honestly, I was a little disappointed that everyone forgets about the transformations in Wet Dream after they're over, but I understand that it would be bad storytelling to deal with a 'he was a girl?!' situation every time he transforms.

Honestly, that's one of my regrets with that story. I think I might revisit it later with a lighter, 10 chapter version where people don't forget and Dean has to hide/run away during the transformations or get caught. It was a cheap cop out I took when I first started writing.

Originally Posted by iamseercoltz

Anyway, thanks for responding, and great job again. I'm looking forward to your next chapters with both stories!

Thanks! I'll be sure to post here when I have a new chapter up.

Originally Posted by tghawk555

Your stories always seem to include hardcore/graphic sex scenes. Is there a reasoning behind that? Not trying to judge, just trying to learn. (After all, if I were judging, the obvious thing to do would be for me to not read your stories, right~?)

Simply put, it gets my jollies off.

I do have other story ideas though that I will get around to once Wet Dream is finished. Some of the later chapters, actually, don't have as much sex and I had to split them into multiple parts because of how much was going on with other things. Once we upload that far you'll see what I mean.

The next story I believe is rated R, no sex, but some body exploration. Then I don't know what I'll work on after that. I have a good handful of one shot stories I want to release without chapter installments, then a few that will be long term like Wet Dream was.

[RavenRift]

Wet Dream ch. 23 is now up. Dean becomes a school girl in this 3 part conflict resolution. It ended up being longer than expected, so it was raised from 2 parts to three, both of which will come out next week because part 3 doesn't have any sex, and only a minimal transformation.

Question, did I ever mention what state this story was taking place? I tried reading through and couldn't find it, but have been avoiding mentioning it simply because i don't want to accidentally contradict what i have previously said, if anything.

[RavenRift]

Frustration is updated, the new character being... Morrigan Aensland! A fan favorite to cosplay and TG, so I can only hope that i gave her justice in this. If it seems too much like identity death, wait until the next chapter and you'll see she's still just a college student.

I chose her because, being a succubus, it'll help with the other characters get into a more believable sex scene after they transform. I'm going to start showing sex scenes with some of the other frat guys around, rather than just Jacob every time.

I also plan on doing "interludes" at certain points where the chapter has no transformations or sex scenes, and is just daily happenings in the frat house. I don't know when I'll do it, I think I'll wait until I have some more transformations done and it's closer to Halloween before I do one of those.

[roycet000]

I have been into TF/TG since '95 with the TSA and such sites.
I know that a lot of stories in the TG genre do fall into the guy becomes girl insert lots of sex trap. We could list them by the hundreds if not thousands. I think in this story given the circumstances of what the protagonist is going through, that the sex is a double edged sword of sorts, it chips away at who he is as a man and yet reveals another side he probably never imagined. It just feels well woven into this grueling journey that Dean is on to recover himself.

As for Frustration I can only hope that since you did a Morgan TG that just maybe a Felica TF/TG might be in store as well

Keep up the good work!

[RavenRift]

Thanks roycet! That's what I am going for. I never liked when the main character flips like a switch, unless they wanted to be a girl to begin with, and tried to space out his accepting of being a woman very slowly.

As for Frustration, unfortunately I am not very comfortable animals and the such in transformations, so I will not be doing Felicia. For some reason mermaids are fine though, probably because of the opinion of them outside of the fetish. "Sultry cat girls? Ew no thanks. Fish parts are totally legit though. Gimme some fish ladies." Makes no sense. Also bring this argument when someone makes fun of furries, they get really angry and it's hilarious.

In other news, Wet Dream doesn't have just one, but TWO chapters up now! The school girl arc got a little longer than I expected so i made it three chapters, though the second one lacks meaty transformations and sex so I released it in conjunction with this chapter.

[RavenRift]

Next Chapter of Wet Dream is now up! Dean becomes a Japanese Scientist and starts to get some... romantic feelings. Will these feelings start to become common ground?