Secret Episode: Diminished, Part 1 PRE-ORDER NOW!!

[Mercurius]

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STORY
During the night drive to Cape Caem, Cindy Aurum gets stopped by a wild Voretooth in the middle of the road...which happens to be a trap for a Necromancer attack! Just as it's about to get her, Aranea Highwind comes to the rescue...or so she thought. Some strange mist from the Necromancer engulfs them, effecting both Cindy and Aranea. Now, they must get to Cape Caem and meet Noctis and his group that Cindy must meet in the morning...that's if they can make it before they get too small!

This adventurous and erotic 40-page comic tells the tale that takes an alternate take of one part of the main campaign.

CREDITS
Artwork - rillustrations

CONTAINS
Part 1: shrinking women, slow shrinking, MMMMF/ff, unaware
Part 2: shrunken women, unaware, F/ff, MMMM/f, unaware, licking tiny woman, vaginal insertion, handheld, bukkake

THIS IS AN ADULTS ONLY COMIC! DO NOT PURCHASE, IF YOU ARE UNDER THE AGE OF ADULT WITHIN YOUR COUNTRY'S LAW!

PANEL PREVIEW:
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BONUS ARTWORK
The SFW and the NSFW version of the cover, as well as other scenarios involving Cindy and Aranea...including the shrunken Iris?

NOTE: Due to the artist's scheduling, the bonus artwork will be uploaded in a later date. You will be notified via email, once the artwork has been uploaded. Apologies in advance. ^_^; )

EDITIONS
Part 1 Regular Edition ($7.99)
-Contains the first 20 pages of the comic in both JPEG and PDF
Part 1 Special Edition ($9.99)
-Contains the first 20 pages of the comic in both JPEG and PDF
-Bonus Artwork and rough sketches of the pages
SEASON PASS ($14.99)
-You'll get both Parts 1 & 2 in both JPEG and PDF
SEASON PASS SE ($16.99)
-You'll get both Parts 1 & 2 in both JPEG and PDF
-Bonus Artwork and sketches that are contained in both parts
-Exclusive script of the comic

NOW AVAILABLE! https://gum.co/diminishFFXV1

Preview pages:
https://rillustrations.deviantart.co...extr-710810482
https://rillustrations.deviantart.co...shed-725169160

[Doll-Elf]

Think I'll pass on this considering how there is more often than not some scat, piss, and other undesirable things in your past comics that when pre-ordered was not mentioned until after the work was made. And as for a comic. I would rather just buy said comic outright than pre-order as it's not an official production like when pre-ordering a WoW expansion, something guaranteed to finish production.

[Mercurius]

I have to ask you this, Doll-Elf: has ShrinkFan or Dreamtales told you EVERYTHING it has in their comics? Has any comic told you what it contains in it, ENTIRELY?

Most comics don't tell you what it contains until you read it. I saw some comics that don't describe the entirety until you pay them.

But, sometimes some mistakes are made and if I wasn't fully upfront with you, I apologize. It was one mistake that I corrected on for later releases. If you continue to not support my comics, I understand that and it's just one loss from the hundreds.

Besides that, this is one of those comics that I don't include the undesirable things...Part One especially!

Not EVERY comic will have those undesirable situations, so it'll most-likely be a hit-or-miss for you.

[qzar9999]

Originally Posted by Mercurius

I have to ask you this, Doll-Elf: has ShrinkFan or Dreamtales told you EVERYTHING it has in their comics? Has any comic told you what it contains in it, ENTIRELY?

Most comics don't tell you what it contains until you read it. I saw some comics that don't describe the entirety until you pay them.

But, sometimes some mistakes are made and if I wasn't fully upfront with you, I apologize. It was one mistake that I corrected on for later releases. If you continue to not support my comics, I understand that and it's just one loss from the hundreds.

Besides that, this is one of those comics that I don't include the undesirable things...Part One especially!

Not EVERY comic will have those undesirable situations, so it'll most-likely be a hit-or-miss for you.

While you do technically have a point, I'd like to counter that things like scat, piss, and diaper play are *definitely* things you should tag, as they are NOT the kind of thing most people want to be surprised by.

Also, as editor of Shrink Fan, I take a bit of umbrage to that. What objectionable content do you think we've had that we didn't sufficiently warn people about?

[Mercurius]

Originally Posted by qzar9999

While you do technically have a point, I'd like to counter that things like scat, piss, and diaper play are *definitely* things you should tag, as they are NOT the kind of thing most people want to be surprised by.

Also, as editor of Shrink Fan, I take a bit of umbrage to that. What objectionable content do you think we've had that we didn't sufficiently warn people about?

I didn't say that you guys had objectionable content. But, it's about not mention EVERYTHING that's contained in it. Like a thorough tags of what to expect in it.

While we're on that, Undertoe 1 & 2 for "cum shower" brings to attention. You notice my comics on ShrinkFan do include that, and most comics just put little info, but not "handheld" or other things that certain fans like to see.

It may not be objectionable, but it's something that many people need to be aware about.

[Doll-Elf]

Cum shower and scat are very different things. One is something sexual by nature and the other is a bodily waste process that can cause disease and infection that most people desire to avoid as much as possible with only a very small minority not offended or actively seeking it.

While there is the obvious answer of "Can't tag everything" There are pre-determined tags the community has selected that are commonly used. scat and diaper Play are two of those and it is unfair to ask for pre-orders without tags or a proper preview of the content. What we see in your illustrated previews are fairly generic and show only that characters are involved instead of an example piece of what is inside the comic for us to understand what to expect and the general idea of the material. Your comic also doesn't seem to follow the character's mannerisms "Don't you dare harm a lady you freak"? It sounds like bad fanfiction to me

[Mercurius]

Originally Posted by Doll-Elf

Cum shower and scat are very different things. One is something sexual by nature and the other is a bodily waste process that can cause disease and infection that most people desire to avoid as much as possible with only a very small minority not offended or actively seeking it.

While there is the obvious answer of "Can't tag everything" There are pre-determined tags the community has selected that are commonly used. scat and diaper Play are two of those and it is unfair to ask for pre-orders without tags or a proper preview of the content. What we see in your illustrated previews are fairly generic and show only that characters are involved instead of an example piece of what is inside the comic for us to understand what to expect and the general idea of the material. Your comic also doesn't seem to follow the character's mannerisms "Don't you dare harm a lady you freak"? It sounds like bad fanfiction to me

So, you're saying that I MUST show that content, even though so many site rules state that you can't. Seems like you didn't know much about how any site's rules work.

Also, what previews I show are the art style and SFW stuff that meet DA
& Gumroad standards. Showing a preview of what's really in it results in me having to blur such, just like DLsite's products, making the consumer confused or DA taking the previews down...and you know how DA is picky with content these days.

And, I have not heard one person complain about the writing and such of my works, until now. I wonder why? Maybe you should do the same to EVERY comic that you seek, and be critical on how one writes. Besides that, I'm not perfect in the writing department. That's why I found an artist who's also proof-checks my writing. I gave him the reigns to make changes here and there, and do some editing of his own.

Speaking of which...where did you get "Don't you dare harm a lady you freak" at? At no point in the comic did anyone say that.

Thanks for the advice, though.

[qzar9999]

I don't think it's that you need to actually SHOW the content in your previews (though I know from experience you can censor stuff for DA lol). It's more that you should always make sure that you tag anything that might be off-putting, and ideally tag anything that's a major part of the story. I'd argue that the cum shower in Undertoe 1/2 doesn't really meet either standard...

Anyway. If this comic does have slow shrink and DOESN'T have toilet/diaper play - which, based on your original post, is an accurate assessment - I'll probably be interested.

[Mercurius]

Okay,qzarr999. That was the one thing I forgot. I uploaded the panel preview that details what to expect. See top thread.

[Prof_Sai]

Originally Posted by Doll-Elf

Cum shower and scat are very different things.

I'd want to be warned about either.

[Anotherfetishguy]

[OhZone]

Where is my niece!? That's what I want to know!