Watch Your Tongue 3 - Shrink Fan Comics

Valeyard Vince · 08-01-2018

Tiny Talks To Towering - Watch Your Tongue 3 is out now!

An increasingly small and desperate Nat seeks help from the formerly shrunken (and now gigantic) Mandy in the third and final issue of Watch Your Tongue!

Synopsis: Now that Nat has the shrinking curse, can she learn the lesson that Mandy did or will she shrink away to nothingness?

Release date: August 1st, 2018
Written by: a0040pc
Lineart by: Michela Da Sacco
Colors by: Ylenia Di Napoli

Tags: shrinking, shrunken woman, giantess, micro, handheld, magic

Series Link: Watch Your Tongue

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rabbit_king · 08-01-2018

fantastic, loved this one

Tiedefender · 08-01-2018

I would say most of this comic is decent.

I do like the hand held and measuring scenes. The size comparison at the end it really good also.

The story transitions smoothly from scene to scene. It also conveys a passage of time.

The art looks better this time around. It is also maintains size consistency better.

What I think could be improved is the pace of the story and the shrinking scenes. The passage of time seemed to fast to me. I also, didn't like how it ended.

With the shrinking I think it doesn't really show it smoothly and less like jump cuts. At least for me it needed better reference points to make it easier to show her shrinking.

ShrinkingOne · 08-01-2018

This comic was not very interesting from a story perspective. The boyfriend is unbelievable. Art is OK but every shrinking process seemed to involve the same setup, outfit, and progression. It was repetitive and not in a good way.

Chapter 02 was OK, but this comic kinda dragged on. I am hoping this series is put on ice and that other writers are given a chqnce who might understand how to create tension or or write smarter characters who don't act like drugged-out bitches.

J Yubari · 08-02-2018

Quote:

Originally Posted by rabbit_king

fantastic, loved this one

Glad you liked it!

In response to the feedback: the Watch Your Tongue series is effectively finished. The writer felt the story was played out with this one.

08-01-2018	#1
Valeyard Vince Process Disciple Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: The Matrix Posts: 1,238	Watch Your Tongue 3 - Shrink Fan Comics *Tiny Talks To Towering - Watch Your Tongue 3* is out now!** An increasingly small and desperate Nat seeks help from the formerly shrunken (and now gigantic) Mandy in the third and final issue of Watch Your Tongue! Synopsis: Now that Nat has the shrinking curse, can she learn the lesson that Mandy did or will she shrink away to nothingness? Release date: August 1st, 2018 Written by: a0040pc Lineart by: Michela Da Sacco Colors by: Ylenia Di Napoli Tags: shrinking, shrunken woman, giantess, micro, handheld, magic Series Link: Watch Your Tongue Download this comic and every other in our catalog with a single 1-month membership to ShrinkFan.com ALSO: What did you think about Watch Your Tongue 3? Let us know your feedback to help us improve! __________________ Senior Editor at Giantess Fan - Expansion Fan - Muscle Fan - Vore Fan - Shrink Fan http://valeyard-vince.deviantart.com/

08-01-2018	#2
rabbit_king lord to all rabbits Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: over your shoulder Posts: 732	Re: Watch Your Tongue 3 - Shrink Fan Comics fantastic, loved this one

08-01-2018	#3
Tiedefender Process Master Join Date: May 2016 Location: USA Posts: 592	Re: Watch Your Tongue 3 - Shrink Fan Comics I would say most of this comic is decent. I do like the hand held and measuring scenes. The size comparison at the end it really good also. The story transitions smoothly from scene to scene. It also conveys a passage of time. The art looks better this time around. It is also maintains size consistency better. What I think could be improved is the pace of the story and the shrinking scenes. The passage of time seemed to fast to me. I also, didn't like how it ended. With the shrinking I think it doesn't really show it smoothly and less like jump cuts. At least for me it needed better reference points to make it easier to show her shrinking. __________________ "Intensify the forward batteries. I don't want anything to get through…Intensify forward firepower!" Admiral Firmus Piett

08-01-2018	#4
ShrinkingOne Process Fan Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 47	Re: Watch Your Tongue 3 - Shrink Fan Comics This comic was not very interesting from a story perspective. The boyfriend is unbelievable. Art is OK but every shrinking process seemed to involve the same setup, outfit, and progression. It was repetitive and not in a good way. Chapter 02 was OK, but this comic kinda dragged on. I am hoping this series is put on ice and that other writers are given a chqnce who might understand how to create tension or or write smarter characters who don't act like drugged-out bitches.