Commission ideas

[tjlemke]

So I've been waiting on a commission from Wren for awhile now and it sounds like it's almost time to start it. So I'm looking for ideas on what the shrinking ladies should be. I was thinking somewhere along the lines of 3 ladies jogging and shrinking or 3 gals at a party but I'm bad when it comes to creative thinking. So if anyone wants to give me a suggestion with a breakdown of scene by scene I'd appreciate the input! The commission (I think we're doing now) is three ladies shrinking over 6 steps. EDIT: I want them to end up at about 2 feet but no less

[Tiedefender]

You could have them shrink in an aerobics class. There could be a new special aerobics class that is opening in their area. Have a gimmick opening special for shrinking the weight right off. They go in wearing the sexiest workout outfits they have. Like leotards, thongs with leggings Edit: and just a sports bra for their top.

Well problems arise with the shrinking room. Instead of targeting excess fat cells it shrinks the whole person. The three ladies are the first costumers to try it out. The class has six levels of intensity. Level one is the warm up. Level five is the most intense. Level six is cool down. At the start of each level they shrink by proportion to intensity. So level one and level six they shrink very little. They shrink more and more from level two through four. Level five they will shrink the most. Once they start they must finish, or they could be left shrunken permanently.

You could have their clothes shrink with them, or shrink out of clothes. Both would work fine. When they finished level six they could be measured to two feet exactly. Your choice if the shrinking is temporary or permanent. Hope this gives you some good ideas to draw from.

[Doll-Elf]

shrinking out of clothes is the most interesting in my opinion. And there being a 24 hour wait time for them to fully grow back.

[Anotherfetishguy]

Pinocchio except every time they lie they shrink

Or a world where height is currency

Or height socialism, the girls either shrink or grow so they're all the same height

[bottle]

What about shrinking during a dungeons and dragons session ?
Maybe the images could be from the dungeon master's view, and istead of six, different images, there could be three images divided in two different scenario: one in-game, where the girls' fantasy alteregos are, for example, cursed with a shrunken spell, and the one in reality where the shocked players dwindle as well.
Maybe a change like this can be drastic, but considering that the size limit is of 2 feet it could be better than a long process.

[qzar9999]

TJ - Whatever happened to that commission you were having Wren do with the spellbook and the five girls? You and I talked about it forever ago and then I never heard anything else.

[tjlemke]

Originally Posted by qzar9999

TJ - Whatever happened to that commission you were having Wren do with the spellbook and the five girls? You and I talked about it forever ago and then I never heard anything else.

Well wren said that he wasn't ready to do the commission since he wasn't well practiced with shrinking. Initially he did a few rough drafts for me but a couple of years has gone by so I figured we could start out fresh.

[OhZone]

Two feet? Well, hun, that's Oh-k, but ya lost me. :P


I prefer micro, but I do have lotsa ideas.

My current fantasy is someone licks me away like a lollipop. Maybe size transfer. :P

[tjlemke]

I like tiedefender and bottles ideas. The D&D thing probably wouldn't work though since i want this to have as little extra stuff as possible to make it easier on wren. The aerobic class thing is intriguing but doesn't quite have the it factor I'm looking for.

[qzar9999]

Scenario: A female adventuring trio (mage, fighter, and rogue) confronting an evil witch. It doesn't go well for them. Page 1 is the trio striking battle poses in their various outfits as the witch charges up a spell. Page 2 is the spell zapping them and them starting to shrink out of their clothes. Pages 3-6 detail the shrinking sequence, with 6 having the much-taller witch looming over the shrunken trio as they try to hang on to their oversized weapons and clothes.

Scenario: Three action archaeologists fighting over a relic in a tomb. One is dressed like Lara Croft, one like a female Indiana Jones, and one as either Evy O'Connell or River Song (your choice). Page 1 has them all grabbing the relic and engaging in a tug-of-war; page 2 has it breaking and zapping all of them with magical energy with them starting to shrink out of their clothes; pages 3-6 complete the sequence, with all of them clutching their oversized clothes and a piece of the relic, looking around in bewilderment and panic.

[Shrinkmaster22]

2 office ladies rummaging around the basement storage find an old chemical container that falls over and releases a strange gas that begins to shrink them. They hurry to get back up the stairs only to lose both a significant amount of height and clothing along the way to the point where they really climbing the stairs. Followed by sneaking around to avoid being seen only for the gas to wear off and they return to full size in the middle of the office for all to see.

[Tiedefender]

Originally Posted by tjlemke

The aerobic class thing is intriguing but doesn't quite have the it factor I'm looking for.

I'm not sure what the it factor is, but I can come up with more ideas.

So a mother and two daughters one is 21 years old the other 19 go to the beach. Both girls are wearing standard bikinis. They are surprised that their mom chose to wear a red string bikini. Dad and 18 year old son stays at home.

The beach is mysteriously empty. They think nothing of it and set up in a prime spot. The water and beach was contaminated with chemical waste. It was leaking from a nearby medical compression lab. The warning signs had not been placed and no one was guarding the beach. So they end up slowly shrinking out of their clothes while sun tanning. When they notice they are shrinking they struggle to keep their bikinis on. Trying to get of the beach only to be found by a decontamination team.

At this point you can have them restored quickly or slowly. Or you can have them stuck at two feet tall for any length of time. The shrinking process can be done at any speed. Could have the father and son interact with the ladies when they are still shrunk. Could put in news broadcast of the event. Both the contamination and shrinking. And the lack of safety in keeping the beach closed and clear of people.

It will be interesting to see what other ideas people come up with.