Sapphire (Complete)

Alchemical Night · 11-01-2007

Hi,

As you can perhaps tell I'm new after being a lurker for some time, and have finally decided to participate in the community. As this forum emerged as the hub for my diverse pallet, I began to wonder if i could contribute anything as art seems the core of this site and I'm not particularly gifted with it, though I can say that my strength lies in writing.

Also my interest in TG, among others, has got me thinking and I wondered if we could not bring more to it, in terms of fantasy bleeding into reality. After some time I decided how to do it and my contribution, hopefully the first of many, can be found her here.

A little story I call "Sapphire" from anime fandom.

See you soon.

flango · 11-02-2007

Good work, really enjoyed the story. I especially liked how you gave greater depth into the description of the transformations as each took place. Well done

12345td123 · 11-02-2007

i agree dang that was good and so detailed and describtive nice work

mario_0345 · 11-03-2007

Wow that was great, I hope you write more.

ToboR · 11-03-2007

Incredible detail! Very well done. The pedicure thing seemed just a touch out of place, but I'm not familiar with the anime this is based off of.

Alchemical Night · 11-09-2007

Yes, your quite right in the final part seeming out of place though I did it as a kind of ironic gag. The character Kanu is portrayed, in both the manga and anime, as a reserved, mysterious and enigmatic warrior who's behaviour is neither what would be considered overtly masculine or feminine, so I thought that our transformee discovering such a distinctly feminine thing after the transformation would give a funny twist at the end of it..............

Or maybe it's just one of my fetishes stirring again. (smile)

CNash · 11-09-2007

For those of you unfamiliar with Ikki Tousen, it's basically a retelling of Romance of the Three Kingdoms set in a Japanese high school setting. The character names are their Japanese equivalents; Kanu Unchou, for example, is Guan Yu.

(In Ikki Tousen, many of the male characters from ROTK are now female, including Kanu Unchou; Guan Yu's famously long beard was changed to her having very long hair instead.)

11-02-2007	#2
flango BE/TF/TG Enthusiast Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: England Posts: 202	Good work, really enjoyed the story. I especially liked how you gave greater depth into the description of the transformations as each took place. Well done __________________ FOR FLANGO PRODUCTIONS, CLICK ON HOLLY> < Link drawn by BSB

11-02-2007	#3
12345td123 Childish Deviant Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: United States Posts: 103	i agree dang that was good and so detailed and describtive nice work __________________ My nindo: Life is like a game play to win Dev: http://12345td.deviantart.com/

11-03-2007	#5
ToboR Cubone Alone Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 292	Incredible detail! Very well done. The pedicure thing seemed just a touch out of place, but I'm not familiar with the anime this is based off of. __________________ Thanks for the Avs! Test-0 (TG, Preg, Cubone) CCP (Bovinian, Felinian)

11-09-2007	#7
CNash What would you rather be? Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 714	For those of you unfamiliar with Ikki Tousen, it's basically a retelling of Romance of the Three Kingdoms set in a Japanese high school setting. The character names are their Japanese equivalents; Kanu Unchou, for example, is Guan Yu. (In Ikki Tousen, many of the male characters from ROTK are now female, including Kanu Unchou; Guan Yu's famously long beard was changed to her having very long hair instead.) __________________ "And the Lord said, 'Come forth and receive eternal life.' But John came fifth and won a toaster." Avatar by Geckz

11-03-2007	#4
mario_0345 Process Fan Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 72	Wow that was great, I hope you write more.

11-09-2007	#6
Alchemical Night Watcher Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 258	Yes, your quite right in the final part seeming out of place though I did it as a kind of ironic gag. The character Kanu is portrayed, in both the manga and anime, as a reserved, mysterious and enigmatic warrior who's behaviour is neither what would be considered overtly masculine or feminine, so I thought that our transformee discovering such a distinctly feminine thing after the transformation would give a funny twist at the end of it.............. Or maybe it's just one of my fetishes stirring again. (smile)