Re: Rob and the Machine(Slow Growth, Partial SM, Mini-GTS, BE)
Glad to see it continued, but I will comment that I did find this chapter rather dry. I think it has something to do with the fact that we haven't actually MET Emily yet, so I don't have a personality or much of a physical description to attach to the dream fantasy, which is admittedly tasty, if not slightly unnerving.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Last edited by Jaran; 05-17-2010 at 05:11 PM.
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