Rob and the Machine(Slow Growth, Partial SM, Mini-GTS, BE)

Jaran · 05-17-2010

Glad to see it continued, but I will comment that I did find this chapter rather dry. I think it has something to do with the fact that we haven't actually MET Emily yet, so I don't have a personality or much of a physical description to attach to the dream fantasy, which is admittedly tasty, if not slightly unnerving.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

05-17-2010	#11
Jaran Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 267	Re: Rob and the Machine(Slow Growth, Partial SM, Mini-GTS, BE) Glad to see it continued, but I will comment that I did find this chapter rather dry. I think it has something to do with the fact that we haven't actually MET Emily yet, so I don't have a personality or much of a physical description to attach to the dream fantasy, which is admittedly tasty, if not slightly unnerving. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Last edited by Jaran; 05-17-2010 at 05:11 PM.