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Originally Posted by Jaran
Glad to see it continued, but I will comment that I did find this chapter rather dry. I think it has something to do with the fact that we haven't actually MET Emily yet, so I don't have a personality or much of a physical description to attach to the dream fantasy, which is admittedly tasty, if not slightly unnerving.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.  |
I did attempt to provide some details to Emily, but I like to allow the readers to add their own specific properties to the characters to make them more attractive in their own minds.
Could be a wrong move on my part, but hopefully not everyone feels the same way.
--Beetle