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Originally Posted by scidram
I don't see a need to know the specifics of the world to enjoy the story. What's more important is that the characters in the story behave in a way that's consistent with that world. It's established very early on that these women shrink when turned on, and they accept that as reality. Also, Megan is well aware of Doreen's history and shows great concern when Doreen starts getting to small, further showing how well the characters inhabit the world.
For that reason, I think this short story is a success. Clear beginning, middle, end. Clear stakes and tension. Nicely done!
Thanks for sharing.
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Coming from you that means a lot. Some of my favorite stories when I first started getting into microphilia were your stories. Long ago, during the days of Yahoo groups, web portals and (by today's standards) tiny, tiny jpgs.
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Originally Posted by mtshrink
In no way was i trying to knock the story in anyway... My brain just wanted to know more  I did enjoy it!! |
I'm glad you liked it. I didn't mean to sound defensive, I just found it odd that same question was asked by two different people.