Werewoman Sequence

AdiabaticCombustion · 11-18-2014

So I've been playing around in Daz Studio, figured I'd make a sequence with it. You can view it here, http://adiabaticcombustion.deviantar...oman-495146265. Fair warning it's a pretty huge file size.

Let me know what you think.

Jake · 11-19-2014

Not too bad.

Apsm · 11-19-2014

I'll admit the girl proportions are a little skewed, but it's a decent transformation.

Reactant · 11-19-2014

Definitely a solid early product. Thx for sharing

Katt · 11-19-2014

Glad to see another TG artist. Now for the criticism.

1. Nipples are weird.
2. Upper portion is too thin for lower proportion, so either make lower smaller or give her some meat up top.
3. Boobies too small.

wellmetbymoonlight · 11-19-2014

Think this is a good sequence and for a first attempt it's great, cant wait to see more of these or your writing.

Wedge · 11-19-2014

Great job! You're on the right track!

Vengeance1701 · 11-19-2014

Glad to see someone else step up and do some work but just some general criticisms from an artistic/anatomical perspective...

1) Toes do not flex like that

2) Voluptuous bottom half, fashion model upper half, does not mix.

3) The hair (when growing) was obviously a repeated pattern and did not look natural.

4) The bust that grew did not match the bust she ended up with. The change was much bigger initially.

But please, take these as constructive criticisms! I mean no ill will and if I did not express that well enough, tell me. I always want to give a positive but progressive response to new artists.

AdiabaticCombustion · 11-22-2014

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Originally Posted by Vengeance1701

Glad to see someone else step up and do some work but just some general criticisms from an artistic/anatomical perspective...

1) Toes do not flex like that

2) Voluptuous bottom half, fashion model upper half, does not mix.

3) The hair (when growing) was obviously a repeated pattern and did not look natural.

4) The bust that grew did not match the bust she ended up with. The change was much bigger initially.

But please, take these as constructive criticisms! I mean no ill will and if I did not express that well enough, tell me. I always want to give a positive but progressive response to new artists.

Thanks for the tips man, I'll keep it in mind for the next time around.

Vengeance1701 · 11-22-2014

I try. Best of luck to you! Hope you continue quickly

11-18-2014	#1
AdiabaticCombustion Process Fan Join Date: Oct 2014 Location: Closer than you think... Posts: 99	Werewoman Sequence So I've been playing around in Daz Studio, figured I'd make a sequence with it. You can view it here, http://adiabaticcombustion.deviantar...oman-495146265. Fair warning it's a pretty huge file size. Let me know what you think.

11-19-2014	#2
Jake Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 305	Re: Werewoman Sequence Not too bad.

11-19-2014	#3
Apsm Lurker/budding TG author Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 269	Re: Werewoman Sequence I'll admit the girl proportions are a little skewed, but it's a decent transformation. __________________ -Male characters I like to see TG'd: Koizumi (Haruhi), Shinji (EVA), Keitaro (Love Hina), Satoshi (DNAngel) -Female characters I'd like to be (Update): Rei (EVA), Ami and Haruka (Sailor Moon), Nene (BGC2040), Teletha (FMP), Haruhi and Mikuru(Haruhi Suzumiya), Yourichi and Rangiku (Bleach), Riza(FMA), Lenalee (D Gray Man), Ennis (Baccano).

11-19-2014	#4
Reactant Frequent Poster Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 240	Re: Werewoman Sequence Definitely a solid early product. Thx for sharing

11-19-2014	#5
Katt Guardian of the OverKitty Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The worst scumhole in the galaxy, Teddy Bear Junction. Posts: 3,270	Re: Werewoman Sequence Glad to see another TG artist. Now for the criticism. 1. Nipples are weird. 2. Upper portion is too thin for lower proportion, so either make lower smaller or give her some meat up top. 3. Boobies too small. __________________

11-19-2014	#6
wellmetbymoonlight Leecher Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 4	Re: Werewoman Sequence Think this is a good sequence and for a first attempt it's great, cant wait to see more of these or your writing.

11-19-2014	#7
Wedge Fan of The Process Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 147	Re: Werewoman Sequence Great job! You're on the right track!

11-19-2014	#8
Vengeance1701 Modest Moderator Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,998	Re: Werewoman Sequence Glad to see someone else step up and do some work but just some general criticisms from an artistic/anatomical perspective... 1) Toes do not flex like that 2) Voluptuous bottom half, fashion model upper half, does not mix. 3) The hair (when growing) was obviously a repeated pattern and did not look natural. 4) The bust that grew did not match the bust she ended up with. The change was much bigger initially. But please, take these as constructive criticisms! I mean no ill will and if I did not express that well enough, tell me. I always want to give a positive but progressive response to new artists. __________________ Meh. Cranky and old.

11-22-2014	#10
Vengeance1701 Modest Moderator Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,998	Re: Werewoman Sequence I try. Best of luck to you! Hope you continue quickly __________________ Meh. Cranky and old.