Werewoman Sequence

[Vengeance1701]

Glad to see someone else step up and do some work but just some general criticisms from an artistic/anatomical perspective...

1) Toes do not flex like that

2) Voluptuous bottom half, fashion model upper half, does not mix.

3) The hair (when growing) was obviously a repeated pattern and did not look natural.

4) The bust that grew did not match the bust she ended up with. The change was much bigger initially.

But please, take these as constructive criticisms! I mean no ill will and if I did not express that well enough, tell me. I always want to give a positive but progressive response to new artists.

[AdiabaticCombustion]

Originally Posted by Vengeance1701

Glad to see someone else step up and do some work but just some general criticisms from an artistic/anatomical perspective...

1) Toes do not flex like that

2) Voluptuous bottom half, fashion model upper half, does not mix.

3) The hair (when growing) was obviously a repeated pattern and did not look natural.

4) The bust that grew did not match the bust she ended up with. The change was much bigger initially.

But please, take these as constructive criticisms! I mean no ill will and if I did not express that well enough, tell me. I always want to give a positive but progressive response to new artists.

Thanks for the tips man, I'll keep it in mind for the next time around.