TheEditor stories

[LostHopeOfDusk]

She is a great writer you probably haven?t read because she refuses to post her stories anywhere but in the dead Doc lab forums.

The Milk Maid

Cowgirl transformation story

Into The Night

One of the best werewolf stories I have read

Cosmic Jackpot

Very well done story about men and women changing into female sexy lizard like aliens.

[jolem]

Last I've seen this was saved about a month ago, when it was halfway into September.

[TF-Viewer]

I dunno.. any werewolf story that includes reversed knees doesn't get high marks from me. Proper understanding of the anatomy of both the human and the canine is a must when describing a transition from one to the other. I'm not saying a person needs to go to college classes and dissect both species in a lab setting, but there's just no such thing as a reversed knee, and the vagina is already located in the exact same position in both species, it doesn't need to move at all like some authors think it does. The vagina is always beneath the anus when the subject is on all fours, describing it "moving back" is just silly.

Sorry but those are just some pet peeves of mine.

[LostHopeOfDusk]

Here is some werewolf rp she cowrote...

http://www.thelabforum.com/forum/vie...609478335b261f

Maybe this one fits your style more?

[TF-Viewer]

Originally Posted by LostHopeOfDusk

Here is some werewolf rp she cowrote...

http://www.thelabforum.com/forum/vie...609478335b261f

Maybe this one fits your style more?

RPs are not my thing.

Hey, don't trouble yourself trying to find something just because I said I didn't care for her TF descriptions.

[frice2000]

So...sex sex sex sex, idiotic characters...Yeah no thanks pretty awful all around.

[LostHopeOfDusk]

Originally Posted by frice2000

So...sex sex sex sex, idiotic characters...Yeah no thanks pretty awful all around.

I guess you can do it better?

[TF-Viewer]

I know of a few people that in my opinion do it much better.

http://cursebearer.deviantart.com/

I don't know if you've read any of his stories. If you haven't, I highly recommend that you read them.

[LostHopeOfDusk]

I have noticed you have been quite negative with her stuff, while I have seen works of lower quality getting praise around here. Please stop being so cynical.

Yes, she can get better, but blatantly insulting her won't do that, all that will do is make her quit and write some other stuff. If you have any personal problems insulting others is not the answer.

And Cursebearer seems to be only doing werewolfes, his or her stories are good, but is just wolfes, what do you think of the other stories The Editor did? Have you read them?

[onallfours]

You know... i thought the stories were okay. I didn't read the lizard one, it ain't my sort of thing.

However i would have thought there would generally be more of an acceptance for almost anything produced by the TF community. It's debatable about the size of the community but it's not so big that there's a steady creation of material so you would think that people may appreciate the effort that people put into writing or drawing stuff.

Let's be fair here the stories in this thread are not bad stories. There wasn't huge areas of bad grammar and poor spelling. The stories weren't bad, the tf weren't badly written. This is the case for majority of stories which are written within the community. The same goes with art, majority of the art is decent and a fraction of a percentage is poorly drawn or scribbled.

On saying that the expectations that some people have of these stories is borderline fucking ridiculous. Do people actually expect huge amounts of character development, original stories, plot twists etc. in these stories.

Have these people forgotten that these stories are written about transformation of some degree?

Hell have these people ever watched a transformation FILM? Have you seen their plots, their characters? They are generally fucking atrocious films.

They are the sort of creations that i would bring my friends around to watch and sit and laugh at how bad they are. These things have budgets, qualified writers who write the stories/characters and directors/actors who put time and effort in to make them... and they are still fucking awful.

Yet some people within this community ( who must be delusional) think that people who don't have ANY of those things will write something amazing.

Like this really does piss me off, not many people make these things and people are so fucking ungrateful about the things people put time and effort into making. Like i said, these people aren't professionals and don't have unlimited resources/time to make these things.

The expectations are ridiculous and unreasonable.

...and another thing i really do laugh when people state that they have a problem with the quality of the transformation... as if they actually know what would happen as if it REALLY HAPPENS.

It's totally pedantic that people think "oh that's not would happen. Oh the anatomy is all wrong"...

Are you seriously trying to debate or complain about something which is fiction and can not/will not ever happen. It doesn't actually matter and people make a big deal out of it, IT CAN'T HAPPEN.

[frice2000]

On saying that the expectations that some people have of these stories is borderline fucking ridiculous. Do people actually expect huge amounts of character development, original stories, plot twists etc. in these stories.

Have these people forgotten that these stories are written about transformation of some degree?

Yes, I expect character development, plot, and original stories and plot twists. If all you want is a transformation scene fine maybe they pass but I want more. I don't want to read a actually pretty long story only for their to be no development and just have a transformation scene. If the transformation scene was extremely vivid and wonderfully written I would forgive the other material to an extent and likely my review would've looked like, "Wonderful transformation scene but characterization really needed work." But in this I just didn't feel that was the case.

If this was posted by the actual writer looking for a review and on what they want to improve I would also have been more generous actually pointing out specific areas that needed improvement. If you look at my posting history regarding prolonged stories you'll see that I can be quite verbose. However, this was another poster going, 'oh look these are really good stories and the author won't post or read your comments', so my comment was more directed to Lost then the writer. These aren't particularly good stories. There are FAR better TF scenes and stories with actual characters rather then cardboard cut outs on this site. Ahmain's stories that are posted on this site come to mind as far and away better then this and those are mostly sex driven so that isn't my problem either as the transformation in those is excellent, and the characters while often a bit shallow are nonetheless likable or you feel a connection to them. These just are not that good and since I can't point out to the author where they aren't that good that's my response. Forgive me for wanting more then just sex and horribly shallow characters in what would translate to around 45 pages in book form. I guess my standards are just too high.

[onallfours]

Originally Posted by frice2000

Yes, I expect character development, plot, and original stories and plot twists. If all you want is a transformation scene fine maybe they pass but I want more. I don't want to read a actually pretty long story only for their to be no development and just have a transformation scene.

At the end of the day, the only way stories can be posted on this board is if they are of the transformation nature. Therefore they can be said to be transformation stories and in that technically character development, plot etc. are secondary elements. You could write a tf scene and have no plot or development at all and it would be valid here.

You have to understand i am not disagreeing with you. It would be great if all the stories had all these things but the fact is that they don't and most likely never will.

I imagine that not many people on here are actual writers or have degrees in creative writing/english. So it is not that i am saying that you are wrong to think what you do or that i disagree with you but it's a unrealistic expectation which seems to be in high demand.

If you take the story i wrote, i don't know if you read it. You can think it's shit if you wish, it doesn't bother me. I didn't put much effort into that, i wrote my reasons in that thread. I don't have time or patience to do that and i am not a writer/don't have the skills needed to write to this expectation.

I imagine that is the case for most people who post here/write or draw material and that is the resulting material. There is definitely effort on their parts, like i said in the previous post not everything is going to be high standard. I would wager that there would be a huge drop in content and a decline in the community if it had to be of the quality you demanded.

It's just unrealistic, it can't be done. Also i get what you are saying you were more harsh because it's not the actual author, i get that as well but still effort went into it.

Originally Posted by frice2000

Forgive me for wanting more then just sex and horribly shallow characters in what would translate to around 45 pages in book form. I guess my standards are just too high.

I can only presume this is sarcasm, it doesn't translate well via text. Like i said above, i agree with what you want but it's unrealistic and in 99.9999 recurring percent of cases it will not be that high quality of work.