Rob and the Machine(Slow Growth, Partial SM, Mini-GTS, BE)

[Jaran]

I really enjoyed this latest chapter. =)

However, like pseudoclever mentioned, the incest angle becomes quite touchy when you start to do things like this. I personally don't really care, but some might.

I'll also second his comments on providing more reference points for the growth. Throwing in numbers here and there is fine, it doesn't always break the immersion, just don't go crazy with them.

Looking forward to the next part. ^_^