Minor process in a story of mine...

CNash · 04-24-2008

One tiny problem I had with it was in part 3, during the girls' induction speech, where their teacher miraculously knew almost everything about what had happened - including that 13-year-olds are sexually active and go into "heat" - despite it only being two days after the event occurred. Unless you want people to deliberately think "How does he know so much?"...

Also, you might say "A wizard did it", but I'd be very surprised if society could piece itself back together in two weeks after such an event, let alone two days.

04-24-2008	#5
CNash What would you rather be? Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 714	Re: Minor process in a story of mine... One tiny problem I had with it was in part 3, during the girls' induction speech, where their teacher miraculously knew almost everything about what had happened - including that 13-year-olds are sexually active and go into "heat" - despite it only being two days after the event occurred. Unless you want people to deliberately think "How does he know so much?"... Also, you might say "A wizard did it", but I'd be very surprised if society could piece itself back together in two weeks after such an event, let alone two days. __________________ "And the Lord said, 'Come forth and receive eternal life.' But John came fifth and won a toaster." Avatar by Geckz