Story: Kit's Change

[Arthax]

Originally Posted by CNash

Ah, I didn't see the line before the story started. You might want to make it clearer in the story itself, though.

Well, Kit is smaller and more petite than Cheetara, and i'm saving most of the "voluptuous descriptions" for her, as she takes on a greater role later on. Kit is also kind of a ditz, which I think is part of her charm here. She becomes more of a sly minx later on.

Maybe I should have gone with Velma as a subject instead, even though the story wouldn't have been as interesting, and I don't know the characters as well.

If there's still any confusion, I could just remove the story and use different characters.