Story: Kit's Change

CNash · 05-21-2008

Heh, sorry - I got a little single-minded there and forgot to give you any feedback on the actual story!

In short, I enjoyed reading it. Skin-rip TFs aren't everyone's cup of tea, but you pulled this one off well enough. The build-up of the beast breaking free from her is better than the execution of that method in, say, "Cat People". Your usage of the characters was good also - not that you really had much of a choice, with Cheetara and Kit being the only female Thundercats (aside from the secondary ones from the later seasons that nobody save the fandom really remember, of course).

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05-21-2008	#11
CNash What would you rather be? Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 714	Re: Story: Kit's Change Heh, sorry - I got a little single-minded there and forgot to give you any feedback on the actual story! In short, I enjoyed reading it. Skin-rip TFs aren't everyone's cup of tea, but you pulled this one off well enough. The build-up of the beast breaking free from her is better than the execution of that method in, say, "Cat People". Your usage of the characters was good also - not that you really had much of a choice, with Cheetara and Kit being the only female Thundercats (aside from the secondary ones from the later seasons that nobody save the fandom really remember, of course). __________________ "And the Lord said, 'Come forth and receive eternal life.' But John came fifth and won a toaster." Avatar by Geckz