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03-30-2006
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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Sairaag
Posts: 4
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Well, I'd say you have a really solid story here ^^
I really liked the little fight in the middle of it, that was a hoot ^^ You may wanna fix the fact that you have two part 12s tho ^^;
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