Formula Number 9 (Complete)

Ryu Hayabusa · 11-10-2009

Excellent story! The only thing I can add is that, while reading the transformation, I actually accidentally predicted the boobs/memories idea, making it feel extremely natural to read that part (and pleasantly surprising). (By the way, I was just playing Dragon Age earlier, and it is fantastic. And also what spurred me to comment, between both coincidences.)

11-10-2009	#11
Ryu Hayabusa Process Fan Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 48	Re: New Fiction From REIF: Formula Number 9 Excellent story! The only thing I can add is that, while reading the transformation, I actually accidentally predicted the boobs/memories idea, making it feel extremely natural to read that part (and pleasantly surprising). (By the way, I was just playing Dragon Age earlier, and it is fantastic. And also what spurred me to comment, between both coincidences.)