A Moment Forever (TG, AP) (Complete)

frice2000 · 12-05-2009

Very nice story all in all. Loved the punishment that you gave to Karyn's father. I didn't really like the accelerated aging of the girl at the end though...didn't feel right should have had a chance at a better childhood. Other then that was quite good and I hope to read more from you in the future.

12-05-2009	#8
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: A moment forever (TG, AP) Very nice story all in all. Loved the punishment that you gave to Karyn's father. I didn't really like the accelerated aging of the girl at the end though...didn't feel right should have had a chance at a better childhood. Other then that was quite good and I hope to read more from you in the future.